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Jack: "Guess I did sort of doubt you, sorry about that." He laughs.
Jack: Laughs. "Yeah, I guess so." He says, looking in the mirror again. "It really doesn't look that bad... And what you did turned out nice."
Jack: "For making me do this... I don't know what it is but uh... Just thanks." He smiles even wider.
Jack: He turns to make eye contact with her. "Thanks." He says forming a half smile.
Jack: "Hey Seraphina?"
Jack: "Really, you're not just saying that?" He asks, still trying to look at it in the mirror.
Jack: He steps out of the bathroom. "Well?" He asks her.
Jack: He continues to wash it as he finishes up, he dries it and looks into the mirror. "Hmm... Not bad..." He mutters to himself.
[stage 4] Jack: "Ok..." He says as he sticks his head under the water, washing the dye.
Jack: "No problem..." He says with a big grin.
Jack: "Well... Yeah. Kinda." He says with a smile.
(Anyway, just move on I guess. )
(I'd farm, but I don't feel like draining all his pots )
(Just some guy from off topic trying to fit in, so he is going too attempt too troll FF.)
Jack: "Well... To be blunt... It's cute as hell." He says with a laugh.
Jack: "It's okay... We can fix this. It'll be all good." He says calmly. "I'll use my phone to try and figure something out... But can I be honest?"
Jack: Rushes in after her, turning on warm water. "Dive in." He chuckles.
Jack: "Oh crap…" He says. "Did that have dye on it?"
Jack: Laughs. "Hopefully it works out like your's did."
Jack: "Is something wrong?" He asks, looking confused.