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Yay! Thanks Bekka <3
Gale: *remains silent, stepping backwards further into the cave, bumping into something warm* () Gale: "야! 누구시죠—" *the assassin covers Gale's...
Perfecto! Can meh be in this fabulous story? ^^ ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ (Korean 'kekekekeke' i.e. laughing)
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Gale: *grabs some moss from a nearby tree, hastily bandages his hand with it, diving into a nearby cave* (but he bandaged well... SUSPICIOUS!!(
(wait a minute... Talking about assassins, didn't I end off yesterday with Gale being dragged into the crowd by assassins? Shoot, scratch that...
(shoot, posted early) (and, he can't let people know about his ancestry, 'cause apparently his family(and all Koreans)are wanted in Ktorai by...
Gale: "야! 돌려줘!" *steps back, startled at his outburst, running out of the inn* (translation: Hey! Give that back! / Ya! dolleojwo!) (he's half...
Amazing! No criticism required :D
Gale: "Nothing." *presses harder, drawing more blood*
I only figured it out after seeing other users's errors XD
Gale: *clenches fists, resisting the urge to stalk out and kill Sweeny* *grabs a dagger from his dark brown sling bag, pressing it into his left...
Gale: "Sweeny?"
XD Just keep typing the 'return' button, then fill up the screen horizontally with each line of the heart (or any other wall art), tapping below...
Gale: "You come here too?" (p.s. he has a low voice XD)
Love it! Only thing is, in the first post, tenses were fluctuating. And there were a couple of spelling errors in the posts. But it's GREAT!!!...
(shoot, grammar mistake *At an inn) Gale: *leaves the room* "Mel?" *bites my lip* (he hadn't meant to call her Mel, he calls her that when he's...
I CAN TEACH YOU >:D Oops, caps lock's on. XD
Gale: *in an inn, having one-night stands with random pretty girls*
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