Separate names with a comma.
-I open the door n look around, I walk around n pick a bed in the corner-
-watches as the bunny hops away- why does everyone leave me
-I reach over and unnoticed pull the fire alarm, I grab my stuff n head out the door, the intercom goes on- That was just a drill...please go to...
( we are all in the same room)
-I lean back in my seat bored-
-I start to shake from being cold but I don't move from my spot under a weeping willow-
-I pull my knees to my chest as it gets colder-
-I pet the bunny n think-
-I bring a wild rose back to life and a little bunny hops towards me-
-I walk by myself-
-I sigh n bring the grass back to life, I then start walking towards the forest that's behind me-
-i wake up n see the grass charred around me-
-I sit down on the grass next to the road n lay back- goodnight my yang
Oh....-I look around not sure what to say-
-I look at him puzzled- how did you know?
-I smile- well I'm Bridget -my shirt comes up a little on the left and a large 6 is visible on my hip-
-I pull my hand away- yea
-I grab his hand n pull my self to my feet-
-I look at him n stand up- w-w-who are you?
( can we go a couple pages please?)