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Zhar: "But you can be. You will help save her from an upcoming threat."
"N-no! I was just wondering, because I wanted to help test it if it wasn't..."
Heath gets up. "Has it been tested yet?"
Zhar: "I've already been there, remember? And you will end up there is you continue the path you are on."
(He isn't short... Lol Your foot is on his face, remember?) "I have only ever really had the materials to make old tech... This is my chance to...
(How can he slap a spirit? XD ) Zhar continues. "Because you will far surpass any kind of power I had. You will do great things, Zach."
Heath looks up at Melly. "Oh, no! I would never do that to such brilliant tech! It's some of the best I have seen! Far surpasses anything I have...
Zhar puts his hand on Zach's shoulder, sending both a chill and warmth through him. "I can help you protect your mother and sister."
Heath jumps and looks over towards her. "Y-you made this!?" Heath kneels in front of her and starts bowing. "I am not worthy! I am not worthy!"
(Btw Kat, I answered at the bottom of the previous page)
Heath touches the hovercraft and moves his hand across it. "Such intricate design..." He says, eyes wide.
Heath is looking at all of the equipment. "It's beautiful..." He stands there with his mouth hanging open.
Zhar's spirit: "Yes... And I am sorry for not being able to help raise you..."
Zhar's spirit: "It's ok.... Son."
Zhar's spirit is standing behind Zach. He is made of white flame, and on his shoulder stands Sebastian, his raven. "Don't be scared."
Comes*
A voice cones from behind Zach. "Please, calm down."
Oh, and I would like to add that he basically worships high-tech stuff, as well as people who are extremely good with tech like he is xD
Update on Heath's bio: Heath was found out to be a child prodigy with tech at a new age. He was already building computers and various other...
(I'd just like to say that I am enjoying Zach lol. Kind of acting like Zhar would about Marcus xD )