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"Alright...Can we eat now? Please?"
Dang
Well I got it right this time but I want it a little bigger WILL UPDATE LATER TODAY
"No no...we've travelled this far and we should eat here" -I look at people and I see a person with a tall dark cloak.He was staring at me-
WILL UPDATE TODAY
(it's either Tony or Sal)
-I smile and follow him-
NOOO! I'm gonna practice so ignore this
Fail! Let me do this right WILL UPDATE LATER TODAY!!!
WILL UPDATE LATER TODAY!!
WILL UPDATE LAYER TODAY!!
( it cuts me off!!) Review mine too luv
Oh Sophie! Read mine please! My Damaged Heart Thanks!
"Oh okay..." -I move closer and pass scary looking people-
-I look at my boss and he seemed annoyed.I turn back to Tony- "Fine. That's okay with me" - He looked at me, eyebrows creased- "Kate...Can I...
-I smile as my pupil sat down infront of me- "Hello...I'm Taylor" -She smiles- "I'm Sophie"
-I smile and look around- "Yeah I do too.Its beautiful"
-I get down and smooth out my clothes-
(bump)