Separate names with a comma.
Akiko- ;Holds Betsu tight, glancing around.; C-c-can we go now?
Akiko- ;Eats her sandwich, shrinking away from the people in the room.;
(Yep.)
Akiko- ;Is bumped by a larger kid.; S-sorry... ;She sits down, rubbing her arm.;
Akiko- ;Grabs a sandwich and follows them, cringing from the crowd of people in the living room. ;
(Neither am I, but it definitely has promise so I don't want it to die.)
(Sounds like a plan.)
Akiko- ;Enters the lunchroom, staying close to Anni and Jenni.;
(Oh yeah, 100 pages!
(A party would be fun. Not at Akiko's house.)
Akiko- ;She walked to the kitchen, waiting at the door for Anni.;
Akiko- ;Her ears perked up as she caught the scent of the cafeteria.; 'M hungry...
Akiko- ;She opens the door all the way and walks out, Betsu hanging limply from her arm.;
Akiko- oh... ;She opened the door and peeked out.;
(How about you use some punctuation? Teehee mean Kiko is mean.)
Akiko- Th-that doesn't make sense... ;She picked up Betsu.;
Akiko- ;Nods; He h-helped me once. Why's he so mean now?
(Yeah, an event would be fun.)
(Basically, it's not the RP that's boring, it's the characters that truly are. So make up more backstory! Have more personality! Stop being so...
(I agree. RP is always exciting and fun at first then often stagnates. Interesting and complicated characters can keep the RP flowing.)