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Bump.
Guys... Mind making threads for them? Otherwise they won't be counted. Sorry.
Bump. I'll see when writing the next update but I might let this die. I'm used to writing dark stories. XD This will be a little... But meh.
Jess: -Gathering ingredients to cook with-
Jess: -Sees the kitchens and her face lights up. Goes inside, looking at all the ingredients and food in awe-
Jess: -Keeps walking whilst looking around-
Jess: -She walks in the direction of the kitchens-
I noticed that too when writing though XD, that's why I added the thing at the end, but meh. Anyways, thanks for saying. ^-^ :3
Well... It's kinda not going to be the type everyone likes, and it's only the first part, which is just setting the scene. :3 I don't want to rush...
(*She applyed for the job because she used to cook a lot but wanted to travel. She figured cooking on a cruise was pretty ideal. I feel awkward...
(Ah, I thought it was a strange question... XD)
((NameJess Dwyers Age18 GenderFemale Appearance Dark brown/ black hair that reaches halfway down her waist. Big, dark brown eyes. Small, yet...
(Can I make a chef please?)
Jess: -Looking around-
:(
Jw, since it's "okay", what could be improved in further updates to make it better?
Jess: -Perches back on her branch again-
Thanks. :3
The title's an MCR song, but it's nothing to do with MCR. Found it on my notes. Wrote this part a few days ago when I was bored in Maths. *** The...
Jess: 1-It's early as hell -Pulls a face- 2- It scared the freaking **** outta me.. >.>