Separate names with a comma.
Jess: -Looks down and smiles- Pretty
Jess: Yup -Nods, distracted looking at the view-
Jess: Ack! -Eyes widen, a liitle freaked out but then grins- Wow.
Jess: -Shrugs- Still cool to fly though
Jess: That's so cool!
Jess: -Smiles- Pretty good.
Jess: Climb up; jump down. -Climbs to the top- See. -Jumps down laughing and lands with ease-
It's really good so far. :D Maybe just make her fall in love a little more realisticly- a little less easily and quickly. Also, you haven't so...
It's back.
It cut part of. D: Guess that's a good thing though. XD
:3Prepare for a long list and rant. My Chemical romance. <3 Fall Out Boy! :D They're baaaaack! Black Veil Brides. You Me at six. The...
It's awesome. :P Update? xD
Jess: Okay maybe not... But there's definetly a resembelance -Smirks and laughs-
(Told you.) Jess: -Laughs- Yup
Woah... I love it.
(Blade, I think you skipped over my post on page 44. :3 It's near the bottom of le page.)
It's good so far, just remember to put punctuation in dialogue.
(Ace never replied.Unless I missed it.)
Bump.