Separate names with a comma.
IAN IAN IAN .-. He sounds hot
BUMP .-.
bump
NOOOOOOO
BUMP
BUMP so good!
OMG BUMP BUMP BUMP
0.0 oh my thats PRINCE NUMBA 3!
Punctuation, seperate dialog, more description, plot, and longer but otherwise good
I don't know you, but bye and good luck
Cant
Thanks ^.^
Pan
Crews
Brew