Separate names with a comma.
Tonight ill update
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>_< ugh! a few seconds late!
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Wait till the next update....
Here's a small update I woke up at 3:30 a.m. again in a cold sweat. I looked next to me and saw that Mason was still asleep. I...
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UPDATE
Separate the dialogue from the paragraphs other then that great ^_^ and BUMP
0.0 oh
.-. well its not nessecary to point out cuz im sure they jnow if they wrote it
will someone update this soon???
O.O actually i do write.... and i do make mistakes like it happens... but pointing out that its another highschool cliché isnt really nessecary...
And we dont care if its a cliché people still like these stories -.-" so yu sir! have no place to complain on yhe writers thread about it
-.-" yur irritating me...