Separate names with a comma.
She's a really good writer :)
More tomorrow, that was page two by the way
Sorry, and thanks for the advice guys. The book really does get better the beginning is just setting up the setting.
So when Mom told me she wanted to move and asked, "What do you think?" I replied, "Let's do it!" Of course, that was before I was standing in...
Is anyone reading this?
By Rachel Hawthorne (not me) I thought I'd write this book out for others to read....