Separate names with a comma.
I meant to put " the doorbell rang" sorry I forgot that
I felt safe with my dad here, I didn't want him to leave for work but if he didn't show or came in late he would be fired. I decided to call...
Here's the next update!!
Thanks, I'm working on the next update, it should be up soon.
I was drying my hands off with a brown paper towel, the generic and typical school kind. I felt warm hands wrap around my mouth, my eyes showing...
I have an update and this one is a shocker!!!
I was more than ready to high tail it out of class and just run, run anywhere so Connor couldn't find me. My small stature would make it easy to...
Update!
Thanks! I'm working on the next update right now
Back in class we learned the days of the week and Mrs. Perez told us about a Spanish trip to Mexico coming up next year that she's planning for,...
Update! What's gonna happen next
The bell had rang while working on finishing my worksheet, it startled me that my hand slipped and marked across the desk. I didn't bother erasing...
Update!
Thanks, Simply. I'll try to incorporate that in my next one. I'd like to keep this story on the first page. It just makes it easier for me.
You guys like it so far? Anything I should do different? Any suggestions?
Connor had asked if we could work in partners and Mr. Condrey said as long as we were all quiet. I shook my head " no, no, no. Don't let him over...
The five minute bell rang and an overwhelming sea of students flocked in, I gazed for the boy I was so drawn to, no sign of him in the first flock...
I entered into my class, 220, math. I stepped over to the desk and talked to my teacher, Mr. Condrey, he seemed nice and told me to take a seat at...
Working on the next part thanks, for all the feedback
Is it good so far?