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Chapter 2 When I woke up, I saw that I was laying down on the couch, two figures walked downstairs and said, "Your awake." I nodded and sat up...
Thanks! And yeah I'll try to some more descriptive words! I'll upload the second chapter :)
Chapter 1 I was on my way home from Meade High School when someone on the bus had started to get sick. I looked over at the guy and saw that he...