The Black Moonlit Wolf Boy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Dec 21, 2011.

  1. I woke with a start,wondering where an Earth I was! I stretched out,yawning groggily as I did so,until edventualy I was well and truly stretched and yawned out!

    I felt confused and slightly scared.When I first woke up I hadn't noticed what was surrounding me.Now when I look carefully through my exaghsted eyes I saw I was in a car wreckage,However it was all empty.Not a person in sight! Whilst I was puzzling over the mystery of 'The Invisible People'as I had proudly named it for now,I hadn't noticed but I had fallen into a deep slumber.

    "Miss?Miss?Miss?!?"
    "huh?" I replied looking up bewildered
    "Not you " Chuckled the doctor "But it's glad to see your awake,You were caught in a car crash but fortounetly you seem to be doing OK now,though you've been in a coma for 3 days."
    "Shit,really??!"I exclaimed.
    "Yep"The Doc smiled "I'll be right back..."

    I waited till he left the room before settling back down into bed and struggled under the covers.My arm and ancle hurt as hell as I pulled the blankets over my head.A whimper slipped put of my now quivering mouth,I had been putting an act on for the doctor.I felt utterly terrible.'What was my life like before?how old was I?did I have a family??' All these questions swirled round my head,somehow I knew they'd be there for a while

    The door creeked open and the doctor hurried in."Miss,I am so sorry but there's been an emergency and I will have to delay your injections for a couple of hours"He cried out,looking helpless.More emergent than a beat up woman who doesn't even know her own name and has just come out of a 3 day coma."Sure,bye"I fumed,trying not to let my anger show.My middle finger begging to rise..
    "Also you may have a few visitors..."And with that he left me sitting there speechless with an oval shaped mouth and a billion questions swirling around my head...

    •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••Sorry I'm a terrible speller:/Please feel free to correct any words.
     
  2. Just one obvious one: Eventually, not edventually.
     
  3. Apart from that, great story! Remember to put spaces in between punctuation marks and commas.
     
  4. Bump,Ill try and update tonight or tomorrow morning(=
     
  5. I forgot to say before but u can also sign up to be in it here(=
     
  6. Name:Danny
    Looks:Sapphire Eyes,Medium-Built,Brown Spiky Hair
    Personality:Witty,Easy-Going,Kind,Caring
    Age:(You Choose)
     
  7. Great,do u mind being half wolf tho?
     
  8. Sure Half Wolfis there vampires?then I would wanna be Half-Wolf and Half-Vampire
     
  9. I'd like to be half-wolf!

    K (Doesn't remember her full name)
    Age: Either 17 or 18 (She doesn't pay attention to the years)
    Looks: Piercing green eyes, long, ragged brown hair that reaches to her shoulders.
    By half-wolf I mean she can change into one, sort of. She looks a bit like a wolf, but not entirely, when she's changed. And when she's human, she looks very wild, which makes other humans a bit afraid of her.

    Everything else is up to you 
     
  10. Great,I'll start on the update but If it's ok I will have to make ur black to fit in with the story:D
     
  11. Cool story so far :)
     
  12. Thanks(update'l be in the morning)
     
  13. YAY! Indeed!!!
     
  14. I fell into an uneasy sleep until my still tired ears heard a loud knocking on the trembling door.I felt anxous at the idea of not knowing who it could be,But the doctor had said I might I have visitor so with that in mind I silently agreeed to let whoever it was in....

    "Come in!" I yelled in the direction of the door.The rapid knocking stopped and the door bust open,nearly being ripped of it hinges,and a young man enentered.He had saphire eyes which reminded me of the moon,he also had spiky light brown,nearly bronze coloured,hair which went well with his black leather jacket and ultra-new chinos.I couldn't help but stare for a second...

    "Take a picture,It'll last longer"He smirked.Damn he noticed me!I thaught to myself,silently growling.
    "Who even are you?"I questioned, blushing.
    "The names Bond,Danny Bond"He joked"Who are you?"
    "I-I don-t kno-o-w" I stuttered sadly
    "You won't ever"He replied solemnly
    "W-why?"I asked,petrified and exstremely confused
    "Because your different...your one of us!..."And with that he left the room,leaving me for open mouthed and speechless for the second time that day.••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••

    Sorry its short