The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Holly's point of view:

    As soon as we got outside I pulled Zack's arm and said,"What the h*ll was that!!!!!???!!! Why did you have to act like such an as*!?!!???!!!!!!"

    Zack turns to me and says,"Because I don't trust that guy. I never have and I never will."

    I look at him still mad but wondering,"Why don't you trust him Zack?"

    He looks at me and says,"Because I just don't. I don't have to have a reason not to like him Holly."

    I grab Zack's hand,"Zackary look me in the eyes and tell me how you really feel about me."

    Zack looks me straight in the eye and says,"I love you more than my own life and I hate seeing you with anyone else. I want to be with you forever."
     
  2. Oops bumpcouldve walled me
     
  3. I love it when guys fight over girls.
     
  4. Thoughts on the story so far
     
  5. A little complicated,but better than most stories 
     
  6. Bump!!  i love it !!!
     
  7. Will update tomorrow morning
     
  8. Gonna try to update some today. I woke up sick this morning but I'm gonna try my hardest to give y'all updates. Idk if they will be short or long but if they are short then it will be at least two back to back
     
  9. Get well soon!! 
     
  10. Zack's point of view:

    I can't believe I told her all that! I had to look away after I did tell her.

    But she...kissed me.
    She actually kissed me!!

    God it felt good to feel her lips...her soft soft lips up against mine again. I grabbed her waist and pulled her closer to me.
    God I love her.

    I looked at her and said,"Holly run away with me."