Match Maker

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rawr-Love14, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. Angelina's P.O.V
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    The air around me smells like crisp leaves and sweet apples. Which means one thing, It's fall my favorite season of the year. I love the smell, the weather, the sound of crunching leaves, plus my birthday is in fall.
    I exit my car and start heading to wards the school entrance. As I'm about there I notice that some body just tapped my shoulder.

    I turn around and see my best guy friend, Luke. "hey, Baby doll" he says with a smirk on his face. "oh, hello dork face!"I say laughing a bit. "don't call me baby doll! Hehe now let's head inside Mister!" I say. "okay Missy, so whats up" Luke say with a happy tone in his voice. "Oh you know just the usual boring as hell life I have" I say. We stop in front of my locker. "well I'll see ya later" I say as I was entering my combination. "Bye"he says and walks down the hall to wards his locker.

    "You two are so CUTE!" a perky voice said. I turn around and I see my short, blonde haired friend staring back at me with gleaming blue eyes. "we aren't dating, Hilary." I say with a smooth tone like I usually do. "well I got to go to class. Bye!" she says and rushes down the hall. I start walking to my class and I Start thinking about Luke. I don't think I will ever date Luke, but I guess he's pretty cute with his dark brown hair, Deep blue eyes, his kinda thin bright pink lips, and his sarcastic attitude.

    I enter Mrs. Aprils reading class and take my seat next to Dylan. "Hey, angel" Dylan says. "hi" I say nearly blushing. I heard a rumor that Dylan was going to ask me out today and I'm pretty nervous cause I really like him. "so what's up?" Dylan says with a cute smile that makes me blush more. "oh nothing really what about you?"I say with a smile on my face. "well, I'm just about to ask out the girl I like" "Oh that's cool" I say sounding a little disappointed. I was really hoping he was going to ask me,but I guess that's not going to happen. "So, Do you wanna go out with me" he says blushing from the question. "Sure" I say smoothly not trying to sound desperate. I'm so happy, I feel like my heart is going to flutter out of my chest.

    After that I sat there taking notes for the rest of class until the bell rang and then I hurried of to my locker. As I approach my locker I see Luke waiting for me there. I come up to him and tell him exactly what happened with a huge smile on my face the whole time. "I'm going to kill him!" Luke says with pain in his eyes. "shouldn't you be happy for me?!" I say confused about his anger. "I gotta go." he says looking mad as hell.

    Next thing I hear is "Fight! Fight! Fight!" coming from the gym. I hurry to where the sound is coming from and I see Dylan on the floor with blood streaming off his cheek and Luke standing up with a huge mark on his chin. "Stop!!" I shout with out hesitation. After that I start running out of the gym, I can hear Luke calling my name as soon as rush out.
     
  2. Bump
     
  3. Love it :) it's so good
     
  4. bump!!!!! 



     
  5. Luke's P.O.V
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    So far the day has been like every other day for me, I go to school, talk to Angelina, listen to the boring ass teachers, and then end the day hanging out with a bunch of friends or I just hang with Angelina.

    Angelina and I have been friends since Middle school and I have to say she just blows me away every time I see her. She'll never know though until I get the courage to get out of the "Friends zone" and actually date her, but what if she rejects me and then we would never really talk like we used to.

    This mourning she looked beautiful, her long reddish brownish hair was curled half way and she was wearing a red plaid dress that looked great on her.

    "Ding!" well, that's the bell I better go to Angelina's locker to see how she's doing. I hurried off to Angelina's locker and I see Dylan walking up to me. "Hey, When are you going to ask out Angel?" Dylan was the only one I told about me liking Angelina and from time to time he would tease me about it. "I don't know" I replied. "okay well that's good."he said looking a little relived. "well, bye" he says with a smirk. I wonder what he's thinking.

    I see Angelina walking thru the crowded halls to me. "hey" I say trying to sound smooth. "hi, guess what? Dylan asked me out!" I stood there shocked for a moment and then I filled up with anger. He knew I liked her!! Did he ask her out just to bother me!! "I'm going to kill him!!" I spatted out with my eyes full of anger.

    I told Angelina that I had to go and hurried to the gym where Dylan was.
    "You Son of a Bitch!!" I shout when I see Dylan. His expression changed from happy into worried in a second.

    "Why the fuck did you ask out Angelina?!"I yell. "Cause maybe I like her too and I ain't waiting for your sorry ass to figure out when to fucking ask her out!" he shouted back at me. This time he went too far and I'm sure he knows it. With out even thinking I clenched my fists and punched him in the right cheek.

    It left a big mark, but I felt like he deserved it. All of sudden he punched my chin really hard. I felt blood dripping off my chin and then I start seeing a crowd gathering up saying "Fight!! Fight! Fight!"

    I stood there ready to punch him again when somebody yelled "Stop!!!" I look to see who It was, I was puzzled it was Angelina. As I say her name she rushes out of the gym.

    Shit! She is probably pissed at me right now. "Dylan, treat her well and if you hurt her, I will show you real pain!" I said and then left the gym.

    I have an idea to get Angelina to like me again, but I need to talk to her first.
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    do you want to be in the story? If you do wall me your character, you should have the name of your character, what it looks like, personality, and age
     
  6. BumpWall me again plz
     
  7.  Datz a pretty good story but got confused towards the end... Bump!!
     
  8. Angelina's P.O.V
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    I run out the front doors of the school and head to my car. I look at the front of the school and I can see Luke running out the front doors.

    Fuck! He's looking for me! I quickly put on my seat belt, insert the keys, and drive away. I drove straight to my house and hurried inside. I locked all the doors, so he couldn't get in if he came to my house.

    What the fuck just happened?! Why were they fighting? What's is this all about? I kept thinking about what could have caused this, and then I remembered Luke's expression when I told him that Dylan asked me out.

    He was very pissed and his eyes looked like they were full of anger. I have never ever seen him this mad before! I wonder if both of them are alright, they were both bleeding.

    Then all of sudden a "Ding Dong" noise interrupted my thoughts. I checked the front door window and of course it was Luke who rang the door bell.

    I opened the door quickly with out even thinking about what just happened. "I need to explain" Luke said looking worried and desperate. "okay, come on in and explain" i say while simply gesturing him inside.

    "I didn't want you dating him" he says. "Oh, so now you decided who I date! It was my choice to go out with him not yours!" I shout at
     
  9. Continued (I accidentally sent the last update) Angelina's P.O.V
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    Angelina's P.O.V
    ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• "Oh, so now you decided who I date! It was my choice to go out with him not yours!" I shout at him. "well, no but I-" "you were what? Going to punch him any ways!" I say interrupting him. "Angelina, I didnt mean to do that!" he shouted looking more desperate than before. "I dont care anymore!" I shout back "I tried to pretend that out friendship was out of hand but It is!" I shout. "What
     
  10. Bump.Wall me when upsated
     
  11. (omg I hate my iPod it keeps sending when I'm not even ready) Continued
    Angelina POV
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    "what are you saying" he says. "I think we need to stop talking for a little while" when I said a little tear streamed down my cheek. "I'm sorry but it's for the best" I said and lead him to front door.

    "bye"I say. All of sudden a warm pair of lips brush against mine. Luke just kissed me!!! "bye"he says depressed. I shut the door closed and I just stand there frozen. He just kissed me!!!
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    Okay, now I'm done! Sorry for the writing problems!
     
  12. It's k.Still


    Still liked it.Bump
     
  13. Sorry for the other emotions.My keyboard is messed up
     
  14. Lol my iPod is being a pain that why there is 3 parts of the update