The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Holly's point of view:

    I continued holding Zack's hand. Mainly because I missed him holding my hand.

    I looked at Zack and said,"Let's go in his room."

    I opened the door and we saw James and Josh.
     
  2. Gasp!! BUMP!! Yay first!!
     
  3. Bump!!! I'm like dying here the suspense is awful 
     
  4. Haha what do y'all think will happen
     
  5. Josh will pretend Like he didn't do anything then he will secretly hurt both zack and Dylan then with everyone out of the way he will try to get holly but she finds out and then realizes she should be with the one guy who was there with her along *cough* Dylan *cough*
     
  6. Zack's point of view:

    I missed holding her hand. I missed her. I wanted to hold her in my arms again. I wanted to kiss her.

    But instead I had to be her friend for a while. I walked into James's room with her hand in my hand.

    The look on James's and Josh's face was all I needed when they saw me walk in with Holly holding her hand.

    Holly went to James and hugged him..
     
  7. James's point of view:

    I heard a knock on my door and I looked away from Josh long enough to see Holly walk in hand in hand with some...guy...

    Holly came up to me and hugged me and sat down on my bed beside me. She took my hand and said,"James I'd like for you to meet Zack. He's the father of my baby."
     
  8. James's point of view:

    I stare at this Zack guy thinking:What the h*ll! HE got her FU*KING pregnant! Fu*k I could've done that..not that I wanted to I mean I don't want to be a dad now but still.

    I glared at Zack,"Hi. I'm James."

    Zack stood there like I wasn't even bothering him and said,"I'm Zack."

    I looked over at Josh who looked doubly pissed at the fact that he was here.
     
  9. Zack's point of view:

    I could tell by the look on James's face that he hated me but ya know what. I didn't care. That's right I didn't give a fu*k.
    I'm the one who got Holly pregnant so I should be pissed that she's trying to be with another guy but I'm not so I don't have anything to worry about.
    I look at him and say,"So James why are you in the hospital?"

    James glares at me with such unmistaken hatred and all I wanted to do was laugh in his mother Fu*king face.

    But I didn't because I knew that Holly probably liked him and I didn't want to ruin anything that we were starting to rebuild between us.
     
  10. BumoTell me when updated
     
  11. Holly's point of view:

    I could see the hatred in James's eyes and I turned and saw the same hatred in Zack's eyes.

    They hated each other? How? Why?

    I turn to Josh and I could see hatred in his eyes for Zack and....James.
    I could also see lust in his eyes for...me?!

    That scared me so I turned and asked,"Zack, Josh can y'all go outside so I can talk to James."