The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. Ooooooh. MORE.
     
  2. This story is addictive! Incredile writer! Can't stop reading it
     
  3. What do you think will happen next???
     
  4. He kisses her 
     
  5. Zack's point of view:

    She turned around to face me slowly. There was so much guilt and regret in her eyes that it hurt to look into them but her eyes were one of my favorite things about her. The way they told you exactly how she felt even when she was lying. Her eyes always gave her away. That's one of things that made her absolutely beautiful to me.

    Her voice sounded bitter though,"What do you want Zack?"

    I looked into her blue eyes like I always did and said,"I want to talk to you alone."

    She looked at me and said,"Whatever it is you can say it now."

    I looked at James then at her then at everyone else,"No I can't and you know I can't so please will you just come talk to me."

    She turned to James,"You can go on. This won't take long."
    James looked at her trying to decide if he should go or not. I wanted to punch him in his face just so he would go but I didn't.

    James said,"Ok. I'll see you in a bit I guess."

    I just thought:Don't get your hopes up as*hole.

    She turned and looked at me and said,"What do you want Zack?"

    I just simply grabbed her hand and lead her down the stairs and out to the parking lot.

    She looked at me kinda confused and I smiled at her and said,"Holly I love you. I never ever wanted to hurt you. I don't still like or love Alaina. In fact I cussed her out and I haven't heard from her since. I've even deleted her number from my phone. Holly I want to be with you. I want us to be happy together and to have our baby and be a family."

    She looked at me surprised and said,"Zack. I-I don't know. You hurt me that day and it's hard to try to trust you again."

    I look at her longing for her again and say,"I know but I want you to know no matter how many times you say no I will always keep trying to win you back to me."

    She looked at me with a very questioning look and said,"Zack what do you mean by 'no matter how many times I say no'."

    I smile and get down on one knee.

    I pull out a beautiful diamond engagement ring and say,"Holly, will you marry me?"
     
  6. bump! 



     
  7. Ekkkkkkk!!!!!!!! But still Josh should totally get holly.
     
  8. no zack they are having a baby! lol


     
  9. OMG BUMP! I love it!
     
  10. OHEMGEE!!!!! 
     
  11. OMG bump plus I need one of Those things that makes your head get close and far with the special music so I can say that better
     
  12. Bump



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