Shipwrecked Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *naomisoxy (01), Mar 7, 2011.

  1. I couldn't think of any names at the moment. So I used a few player's names without permission. Forgive me. 
     
  2. I couldn't think of any names at the moment. So I used a few player's names without permission. Forgive me. 
     
  3. Oh. And I apologise. Forgot to mention that ninz was a girl.  I wrote it as men.
     
  4. Hah I don't think they would care, if anything they should be grateful. And hah I am kinda very conceded hah lol
     
  5. I'm a man?
     
  6. Your really good at writing though :D
     
  7. Hah this is funny
     
  8. More more more u should write more! And am I gonna get hurt when we crash? That would be cool
     
  9. More please
     
  10. Can I be an evil villain? :eek:
     
  11. Naomi

    She traced her fingers along the heavy oak table. The place on which she stood seemed somewhat familiar.
    A small girl with long black hair ran past her, laughing with glee.
    "Naomi! I'm gonna getcha! Come here!"
    "Neh neh nee neh neh!" the young girl turned around and stuck her tongue out. "I'm gonna win daddy!"
    "I've caught your sister, Naomi! Daddy wins this time." he laughed.

    Naomi absorbed the whole scene. 'Daddy?' she thought to herself. She turned around hoping to get a glimpse of the face of the man this girl called "Daddy". But when she did, all she could see was his back, as he carried a little girl laughing along with her. Then another girl ran from behind and jumped onto the man screaming with joy. "Daddy, me too! Me too!"
    "Come Naomi, let's go see what your mummy has cooked up," he said as he scooped her up with his free arm.
    As he held his daughters in his arms, little Naomi turned around and looked Naomi straight in the eyes. She gave a huge toothless grin and waved. By reflex, Naomi waved back.

    A sudden knock was heard on the door. Naomi jumped awake. She frowned as she rubbed her temples. This dream had been haunting her for a long time. She would never be able to see the face of her father, nor the other girl she knew as her sister. Her memories would only give her so much.
    Knock. Knock.
    Naomi swung her legs over the side of the bed and made her way to the door.
    "Ma'am, I'm here to deliver your luggage."
    Naomi looked through the peep hole and saw a young man wearing a smart uniform surrounded by a pile of black duffel bags.
    She unlocked and opened the door.
    "You carried this all by yourself?"
    "Yes ma'am."
    Naomi chuckled. "You're pretty strong. Thanks. I'll take it from here."
    She handed him a hundred dollar bill and grabbed all the bags with one hand, heaving it into her room. She locked the door behind her, leaving the bell boy in a state of shock; his trolley was actually hidden by the wall in a failed attempt to impress.

    Naomi chucked her bags by her bed. She did a time check.
    "2 hours to survey the ship." she said to herself, unzipping a duffel bag.
    She took a look at the machines stored in the bag.
    "Hmm, good job Damien. You actually managed to smuggle in my favourite pieces." She took out a Jungle Primative and unsheathed it, admiring the blade. Putting it back, she picked up her signature pair of desert eagles- a gift from Hank for the success of her first mission.
    Naomi packed everything back into the bag, laying it beneath the dressing table. She tied up her hair into a short pony tail and put on a pair of Marc Jacobs shades.


    Charlie

    Charlie pushed himself out of the water. His fingers were all wrinkly from the swim.
    "Hey Nathaniel, I'll be heading back first."
    "Yeah sure. Catch you later Charles." Nana smiled.
    Charlie grabbed a towel from the attendant and made his way to the rooms. He gave his head a good rub and draped the towel over his shoulder.

    "Diamond Class... Diamond Class. Damn, where the hell is it? I can't believe I'm getting lost." he cursed. Down the hallway, he saw an Asian lady come out of her room. She had a somewhat intimidating look about her. Her hair was tied back into a short pony tail, and she had on a pair of Marc Jacobs. All this accompanying a plain White tank, khaki cotton blouse and a really short pair of shorts that revealed long slender legs.
    She looked up at Charlie and noticed him staring at her.
    "Can I help you?" she asked, with a clear pleasant accent.
    "Err.. "
    "Err?"
    Charlie shook his head.
    "I meant, may I know where to find the Diamond Class Suites? If you know where that is."
    She raised an eyebrow.
    "You're standing in the hallway of the Diamond Class." she replied and strode past him, slipping her hands into her pockets.
    Damn! Charlie thought to himself. He felt like such a fool.
    He scratched the back of his head and went to search for his room.
    'If only I could remember where that was...'
     
  12.  this is good , write me in plz
     
  13. Hah do I fall for you?
     
  14. She stood around the corner, listening in to the two strangers down the hallway. The female was an Asian, the other looked like a rich young brat.
    "First contact, 10am." she whispered into a recorder.
    Suddenly, the young man turned the corner and almost ran straight into her.
    "Whoa, sorry bout that." he grinned.
    The moment she looked at him, she was mesmerised by his grey eyes.
    "Erm. You alright?" he looked at her curiously. She didn't notice that she was staring.
    "Yes." she replied curtly.
    "Umm-"
    "No, I'm not going to introduce myself." she quickly replied.
    He raised an eyebrow.
    "I was going to ask you to please move aside since you're standing right in front of my door. But you can tell me your name if you want." he chuckled.
    She blushed.
    "Oh. Sorry. Bye." she said and quickly walked off.

    Charlie

    Charlie was amused. He watched as the young woman made huge penguin steps while walking down the hall.
    "How cute. She's embarrassed."
    Charlie jumped.
    "What the - !"
    "Haha. Chill dude. It's just me." Nana was grinning from ear to ear. "She's got the hots for you dude."
    Charlie smirked. "Like who isn't."
    Nana rolled his eyes. "Whatever man. We gonna go in or what?"
    Charlie turned and placed his thumb on the sensor. His eyes fell on the small words at the base of the scanner: Black Pearl Industries. He sighed and walked into the room.

    Naomi

    Naomi was pretty sure she heard a soft whisper around the corner as she spoke to Charlie. A voice that sounded way too familiar.

    She walked up the stairs leading to the deck. The moment she reached the top, a blast of wind hit her face, and her eyes spotted the blue of the waters. She walked to the railing and smiled. The seas always seemed to have a calming effect on her.
    All of a sudden she felt a round object thump on her back.
    "Help me..." the voice whined.
    Naomi shook her head and chuckled.
    "I knew you were there Ex. Your whisper wasn't really a whisper."
    Extasy stood beside Naomi and pouted. "Whatever."
    "Damien told you where I was?"
    "Yeah. I asked nicely. Promise." Extasy bit her lip.
    "By nicely, you mean with a shotgun to his head?"
    Ex's eyes widened. "Nooooooo... I would never do that. It was just a really long Katana a little fake voodoo. Just a little."
    Naomi burst out laughing. "Damien is scared shit of voodoo. Ahaha. Nice one."

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    Ninz popped a lollipop into her mouth. The bridge was getting boring with Josh and the Captain discussing about the next step.
    "Where'd you get that?" a voice inquired.
    Ninz spun around and almost bumped into the owner of the voice. "Oh!" Ninz laughed. "It's just you Andrieth."
    Andrieth smiled. "Who else were you expecting?"
    "Oh I dunno. Maybe, you know who?" Ninz started humming.
    Andrieth turned serious. "We'll just have to wait Ninz. Not long now."
    "Yep." Ninz chirped.
     
  15. Omg naomi this is awesome 
     
  16. Awesomeeeeeeee