Frozen

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Dec 16, 2011.

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    The heat burns as hot as laval, pouring down my spine, burning me to the core. But suddenly cools, freezing me, stabbing pointed edges of ice through my skin.
    My hands twitched, trying to rub themselves together to keep my blood flowing through my veins. I couldn't move, I couldn't open my eyes, I couldn't even breath.
    Where was I?
    What was the last thing I was doing before my body had been taken over by this unknown force?
    I had been laying in my bed, half way asleep, then.... That's all I can remember.
    Although my teeth rattled together through the cold, sweat matted my hair to my forehead, and the burning in my back continued.
    I wanted to try and move, get somewhere safe, and out of this blistering icy hot climate. But not one inch of me would move.
    As I heard a grunt, from behind me, and felt a presence brush across my back. At this, fear crawled in me, and my thoughts returned. I found my voice again, and parted my lips to start.
    "Hello," I said, weakly noticing the dryness of my lips. No doubt I have been here for a while.
    "Hello." A musical voice rattled through clenched teeth no doubt.
    The voice was very close to me, so close I could feel the vibrations of the voice hit my back.
    That was when a dim light brightened up the room just enough to see chains wrapped around my entire body, stingingly cold. And at my back I felt someone chained with me.
    I felt the fast beating of the heart behind my back.
    The voice that spoke had to be a guy. What was going on, why was I here, and why was I sharing this chained Jail with a guy.
    Fear crawled in me as I imagined the possibilities.
    I had to get free, now

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  2. Sorry not to be rude or anything but can you finish the stories you've already started before starting a new one? I've been waiting for you to update hunting dawn and full moon for the longest now.