The Perfect Two

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by HollyS, Dec 10, 2011.

  1. I want more plz
     
  2. Thinking about updating one last time tonight. Do y'all think there might be something about to form between James and Holly
     
  3. maybe  lol but bump!!!! 



     
  4. Bump





    Bump





    Bump





    Plz update I love the story
     
  5. Holly's point of view:

    After I bumped into those two really hot guys I went to the bathroom to try to stop my crying. I had to talk to somebody. Anybody.
    I knew Dylan couldn't help because he has a girlfriend and she hates me and will barely let him talk to me. And Hailey was always busy with school work here and college courses and work and her boyfriend so I couldnt talk to her either.

    I was all alone. I had no one.

    I touch my stomach and whisper,"At least I'll have you with me always."

    I walk out the bathroom and make it to 1st period right before the bell rings and that's where I meet the guy I bumped into.
    His name is James Cobalt.

    I thought to myself: Would I be able to talk to him about this or would he just turn me away? Would there be more between us if I tried for it?
     
  6. bump!!!! 


     
  7. Zack's point of view:

    She ran away from me. Why would she run away from me? Why wouldn't she want me in the baby's life?

    I thought about all these as I walked to my 1st period. I didn't understand.

    Zach came up beside me and said,"Dude you've been spaced out for like 10 minutes. What's going on?"

    I turn and look at him and say,"You remember Holly, right?"

    Zach looks at me and says,"Yeah. Why?"

    I sigh and say,"Well I got her pregnant."
     
  8. Wtf

    Zach

    Zack?

    Confusing
     
  9. Yea I know but Zach is like 6'2 and Zack is like 5'8 or 5'9 lol
     
  10. bump!!!!!!!!!! 


     
  11. Will update tomorrow. Going to bed. Hopefully I'll dream up some more stuff about the story:D
     
  12. goodnight  sleep well



     
  13. BUMP BUMP BUMP!! 
     
  14. Zack's point of view:

    I look at my best friend waiting for his reaction but he just stares at me shocked.

    I had closed my eyes waiting for him knock the Fu*k out of me but when he didn't I opened one of my eyes and said,"Dude did you hear me?"

    He looks at me like:WTF you idiot of course I did.

    Zach shook his head and said,"Dude you're fuc*ing screwed. Does she even want you in the baby's life?"

    I stand there for a minute and think about that and say,"Well she said she doesn't know if she wants me in the baby's life or not but I hope she does because I really want to be there for her and the baby. How am I screwed?"

    Zach says,"You are so stupid dude. She got pregnant by Jerame right but she lost the baby. Jerame wanted that baby and so did she right? What makes you think that Jerame doesn't want to try to get this baby and her away from you?"

    I look at him and start walking,"Because Jerame is at college there's no way in h*ll that he will get Holly away from me."

    Zach shakes his head in disbelief,"Whatever you say man."

    I walk in Mrs. Duran's room thinking all these things over and thinking:I have to do whatever it takes to keep Holly.
     
  15. bump!!!!! 