Heaven or Hell

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *FashionablyOnTime (01), Dec 11, 2011.

  1. I died a few months ago but God decided to let me choose heaven or hell. Well maybe it was because how i died...I'm 14 and my name is Alice and this is how I died.... I just gotten home from school and I live in my own apartment with my boyfriend. I was pregnant a few months along and I hear noises and I pray that he isn't cheating and I open the door and he was with a stripper. I pulled her out by her hair and kicked her out literally.... He apologized and looked down and his eyes filled up with tears. He said "Im sorry little daughter or son daddy made a bad mistake but still loves mommy stay happy" when he looked back up and whispered in my ear I'm so sorry please don't leave me. I told him I wish he wasn't the father and then I called my mom to tell her what happened since she bought us the apartment she swore so much she maybe taught the baby some. I decided I'd leave so I started to pack my bags he kept screaming at me. He kept saying I love you to the baby and I yelled at him THE BABY KNOWS WHAT YOU DID! Then I ran out and as I was about to step down on the stair a wine bottle hit me in the head and I fell down the stairs. Me and the baby were dead when we reached the bottom. Tell me if you like so far
     
  2. Also if you want to be apart of the story as a character just put the name features and characteristics and everything
     
  3. Name:Danny
    Appearance:Brown spiky hair,big hazel eyes,medium-built
    Characteristic:Kind,Friendly,Witty
    Age:15
     
  4. Lol okay thanks I will definatley add ya in
     
  5. Suddenly I'm upon the clouds
    and I'm sitting before St. peters he looks at me with sad eyes. God appears it was amazing he said I must walk through the angel and dead path before I can choose. How I choose when I don't know why I'm getting a choice. Then I was a blank figure with no name... I was in a gaint room filled with regular people and blank people. I was asking everyone for help but nobody would... Then a blank figure came up and offered me a hand... The name he had chosen was Danny. He showed me all the steps to become a regular "angel" and not a freaky blank person. Finally I look human I tried to choose the name Alice but it denied and gave me Jade it was weird. Then when I was finished I was Jade Yasmine Kira. Long Light blonde hair with black tips and red streaks. Hazel eyes other figures said I was a natural beauty. Something appeared over my shoulder it was my baby! except it was a little angel looking thing. Life was amazing a beatiful home, great clothes, and I can talk to my beatiful baby Stefanie Alice Kira.
     
  6. Dolph

    Red hair, big hazel eyes. Ever so slightly smaller than average height.
    Skinny.

    Funny,sarcastic,super nice. But still tries and keeps a little of her human personality. Cool, random, mean if she has to be(to stand up)

    She died because she was cheerleading and at the top of the pyramid when this guy from the stands threw a knife at her and knocked her to the ground with the knife in her thigh.
     
  7. Will update soon but I also need more characters so feel free to suggest
     
  8. Name:
    Elle (Pronounced 'El')
    Characteristics:
    Funny, Loyal, Party-Animal, Risk Taker
    Appearance:
    skinny dark hair and eyes
     
  9. Wow Danny has such nice friends like a nice Red head who looks like my step sister Dolph she's shorter than me but it's fun being taller for once how she died was sad but I wish my baby didn't have to die...:( well life happens. Then Elle who is strange she somewhat dodged off before we could meet hmm i don't know well. I wish I could see my mama again she's so sad I hear her prayers to me. I think i might ask Dolph about Elle maybe she knows more about her. Well I feel so bad for Stephanie because she never blamed me for what happened I wish we were alive again she would be the most perfect child oh no there's a meeting for newcomers *sigh* I guess I have to go maybe Danny and Dolph will be there I hope :)
     
  10. If ur dead,y t u writin and talkin?
     
  11. I'm not really dead and these are my thoughts (my character) if you have a problem with it then don't read it
     
  12. I didn't even read it
     
  13. this is boring anyway
     
  14. Says you but others like it and that's what keeps me writing
     
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