my creepy 7 yr old dream

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *titi121yippy (01), Dec 9, 2011.

  1. This is me when I was seven, or as much as I can remember... I'll tell you when It isn't what happened anymore.
    (I only remember my actions, dialogue is made up)




    Chris had just finished his front thing for his notebook. It was great, it explained the reason for writing the stuff inside and everything, but he was nervous. Nervous that someone finds out and kills him.
    "ok... That should do it, now to start on the inside, the key to my success. The reason I take over the world. I've got it all planned out, I just need a pencil, my Legos and I'll be ready."
    He pulled out his giant tub of Legos
    "alright, I'll start small, with these guys as my model." he started fitting some pieces together
    "aha! I have this one ready"and he begins to write in his notebook.
    "ok, so its a artificially intelligent turret, with a lightweight, small, yet durable base. It'll be mounted on a 360 degree pivotal stand."
    "Yes", he thought, I can start with this, and do more, and take over."








    or
    And should I continue?
     
  2. Thats shorter than I thought.. But it's all true so far, except dialogue. I was messed up 
     
  3. Any/all feedback is welcome tell me if you'd like me to do something different with my presentation, I'm open to suggestions
     
  4. "yes, I have my turret, and when I'm older I'll make it out of metal and take over... But untill then, I think I need a basic troop transporter... Ooh, and war machines..."
    He sat down and fiddled with his Legos... Alright, this one will have two turrets attached, and it'll be troop transporter..."
    He wrote something in his notebook
    "ok... And I need mobile units. That will fit inside the transporter... But I need machines. Robots are too old school..."
    He thought for a second, and a jumped up
    "oh my gosh! It's perfect! I have the best idea" he quickly shoved some Legos together
    "alright... A lazer gun that messes with molecules in the human body, turning them into pure machine"
    He scribbled instructions on how to make it into his note book and though for a second.
     
  5. Lmao ur such a dork! That was funny 
     
  6. It's true  you wait 'till I either forget what happened next or I start making it up on my own it'll prob sound totally messed up
     
  7. Teehee it's pretty funny 
     
  8. Yeah alright, I'll update again in a second
     
  9. *Yeah. I'll(etc)
     
  10. He sat down humming. This was going better than he thought, he had basic units, a mobile devise, and so many ideas.
    "oh no" he looks at the ground horrified
    "what if I'm nuked"
    He's panicking now, about to throw up
    "aha! I'll create a safety vehicle, able to go on land, water, air, and even space... And the mountains and mud and stuff" starts humming as he builds his personal transportation vehicle
    "alright, get it into my notebook"
    Jots down building instruction and it's purpose "and I might as well give it some turrets for extra protection "he adds the turrets to the instructions "id say I'm ready for a simple invasion... No, more complex, you can't scare your foes with just this... I need more."
     
  11.  I was so messed up
     
  12. You were! Jk i wad more messed up! How long ago was this!! I'm 15 almost 16 and I barely remember anything from before I was 8... 
     
  13. I was 7 
     
  14. Lol I meant something else but never mind lol  I was crazy obsessed with pokemon as a kid!
     
  15. My brothers Lego story:

    He was switching the clothes around. The various bits scattered amongst the floor. My mom walks in. Demands to know what he is doing. He replies with a I'm changing their outfits... She thinks that she's raising a serial killero_O
     
  16. Chris sighed. So far he had his basic soldiers, his troop transport, his escape vehicle, and a couple more complex, yet still quite simple.
    "ok... I have enough to destroy a small army with the metal parts. I just have to find out where I can get them"
    He looked around his room
    "why don't I ever have anything important in here" he fumed. "oh well, I'll find a way, but untill then I need something big, something grizzly... Something... Star wars." (an actual thought of mine *facepalm* I was really weird) He rubbed his hands together
    "how about... Something like a transformer star wars guy(another actual thought from then) it'll be on 8 legs... Yes, with several turrets all over it, and holes for my soldiers to poke their weapons through" he looked around for some pieces
    "three, and they'll be giant, plus a million troopers, and my turrets, should win me some country..."