It was over. Done. The man had stabbed me in the stomach twelve times and strangled me with a phone cord. My body was in the trunk of his car, I was sitting beside it. I must be invisible now because he never showed any reaction when I rose out of my body. This is death. The car stopped abruptly and my body slid across the floor like some rag doll. The trunk door opened and the man stooped over to pick up my body. He was carrying a large shovel. He dropped my body in the middle of the road and began digging. He finished hours later and dropped my body into the hole. I had an unknown grave in the middle of an abandoned gravel road. Thanks to this man, I was Reborn. *opening music, preferably Sanctuary by Utada Hikaru* (cause that song is stuck in my head )
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Thanks On with da story! ______________ "Answer, get out of bed, your late for school!" My sister, called from downstairs. "ANSWER!" I heard loud footsteps coming up the stairs. "Answer, you're LATE," She screamed outside my door. "I know," I mumbled. I slipped out of my bed. I was still wearing my clothes from yesterday so I didn't bother getting dressed. "We have five minutes to go!" She yelled. I finished putting on eyeliner and headed out the door. Yes, this is my previous life. I live with my sister in our rag-tag apartment in north Manhattan. "Hey Answer, I see your wardrobe hasn't gotten any better," Addi McCray sashayed toward me. "Shut up," I tell her, reaching for my math book inside my locker. "I have a right to speech," She said, holding her head high. "So do I," I said. "No one wants to even HEAR you!" She sneered. I kicked her right in the shin. "What is UP with you today?!" I yelled. "ow!" She fake cried. A teacher came over to us and reassured her as she pointed to me, claiming I just walked up to her and kicked her randomly. "Answer, we've been through this, one more detention I swear...." The teacher blabbed on and on to me. Meanwhile, I just stared blankly at him. I wish Addi would just die. Then, I was falling. Falling off the bridge into the water below me. I felt pain as the freezing cold water touched my skin. The pain as I lost my breathe and began to suffocate. I was dead within seconds. "Answer, Wake up! Wake up!" Kestion whispered in my ear. My eyes opened slowly. "she's awake," Kestion told a nurse. "Where am I?" I asked. "Hospital," She answered. "Why?" I was confused. "You fainted and hit your head. You've been out for about a whole day," she responded. "But I fell off a...." I began. It must have been a dream, but it was so real. "Oh, and to catch you up to date, Addi McCray jumped off a bridge," Kestion said, handing me today's school newspaper. "Wow..." I replied. The question was, did I do this? ____________________