kids these days

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *breebreenum1 (01), Dec 7, 2011.

  1. •Kids these days•

    Children these days they so young and stupid
    Got a couple bucks they asking for a candy cane
    Eyes glued to the tv like there's nothin wrong
    I mean soon u gonna be the geek in school
    Bullying and teasing get out my room
    I know u got the "package" but that's so uncool
    There's nothing more to say about kids these days..... So I hope what u did really pays


    My rap enjoy good day night evening afternoon
     
    #1 *breebreenum1 (01), Dec 7, 2011
  2. It sucks
     
    #2 Take_A_Chance_on_meAKA_PWND, Dec 7, 2011
  3. Very, PWND.
     
    #3 *oOoOAshleyOoOo (01), Dec 7, 2011
  4. Eh  im sorry lol please still be my frwiend?
     
    #4 renamed48891, Dec 7, 2011
  5. I'm glad u don't like it but I tried
     
    #5 *breebreenum1 (01), Dec 7, 2011
  6.  what the hell? I'm not a rapper but I think they're supposed to rhyme :? :roll: :lol:
     
    #6 TBB-Zacmac-, Dec 7, 2011
  7. It was a rap?
     
    #7 No_Heart_Soft, Dec 7, 2011
  8. I'm just beginning lol but I think I did kind okay for the challenge my mom gave me
     
    #8 *breebreenum1 (01), Dec 7, 2011
  9. the only thing that rhymed was school and cool.....
     
    #9 TBB-Zacmac-, Dec 7, 2011
  10. *uncool, not cool
     
    #10 TBB-Zacmac-, Dec 7, 2011
  11. Ik I made lots of mistakes in there like candy cane should be candy canes and the geek in school should be the geek of the school
     
    #11 *breebreenum1 (01), Dec 7, 2011
  12. Well maybe you should go back an check it before you post...
     
    #12 No_Heart_Soft, Dec 7, 2011
  13. True true
     
    #13 *breebreenum1 (01), Dec 7, 2011
  14. Great try  
     
    #14 -ShayShay-, Dec 7, 2011
  15. That was a rap? I didn't noticed till it said rap...



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    Atleast he did 
     
    #15 Hill_, Dec 7, 2011
  16. "I don't have to rhyme these words into a rhythm for you to know it's a rap." ~Eminem.

    But really, it isn't too good. 
     
    #16 *Josh-PIMD (01), Dec 7, 2011
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