Charming a Stranger.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Oct 14, 2011.

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    I was walking down the hall with my besite, Jennifer Jane McKenny. She gers made fun of for her name, but I think it's unique.

    "Avery."

    Jennifer whispered under her breath, her red hair covering her freckle infested face, and her bright green eyes glaring at Monique, our school slut.

    "..."

    Me and Monique have nothing in common. And when I mean nothing, I mean NOTHING.

    My pale brown hair and hazel eyes don't match up to her silky blonde hair and bright blue ones.

    I was a quiet bibliphile. Always hiding in the library, blending in with the background, camouflouged during my stay in the room of books.

    She was a gossip queen, known for starting the school's most horrifying drama scene. The most horrific was when a girl commited suicide. No joke.

    The french drama queen turned around, and smiled. She walked her little tranny walk and blew a kiss goodbye to her "boyfriend".

    Monique had walked up to me. We were both the same height, and she began talking rapidly in english using her french accent.

    "Ah! Avery! What a coi'ceedence! Me and Johlee were talkeeng abou' you! Are you attending ze dance? I planned eet eespecially for you!"

    I rolled my eyes. She ha been bragging about that dance for months, stating that she and her "boyfriend" Zachery would attend. And you can never forget Johlee, her bitch of a best friend.

    "Mhmm... Yep."


    And after that, me and Jennifer pushed past her and walked away.
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    "... Holy shit, Avery we've got four months to find you a date!"

    "Mmm... Why?"

    "DUH. Monique and her little boytoy are coming. You can't show her up with only a pretty dress and sweet talk attitude!"

    ".... I'll think about it."

    Me and Jennifer were sitting in our favorite shop, drinking our favorite drinks. It was called "Sweet Paradise" and was run by Vivi and her mom. Vivi was a very nice person, and her mom too. I pity her and her loss. If her dad were still here, I'm sure Vivi would be a much happier person.

    "Ahh... This strawcherry shake is delicious! Same with the chocolate donuts Vivi, you've really outdone yourself!"

    Vivi smiled at us, and sat down on a chair.

    "Oh, it's just a hobby of mine, making delicious treats..."

    I smiled at her. She had really outdone herself...

    Vivi was smiling brightly, her brown straight hair with pink highlights messing up her pretty appearance. She had blue eyes brighter than Monique's, and she was from Greece.

    "Well this is PERFECT! Magnifico!"

    Jennifer kept throwing compliements at Vivi, and I just sipped my Vanilla Shake.

    "... Oh yes, Avery?"

    I looked at Vivi.

    "It seems like you need a date for the dance..."

    I raised my eyebrow.

    "I know... the perfect guy!"

    I raised another eyebrow.

    "Or maybe not..."

    I let both my eyebrows fall. Vivi was known to date... Weird guys. Once, she had dated somebody who claimed to discover the "many uses" of toe fungi.


    "We got to go, Vivi. See you."


    We walked out of the shop, waving goodbye to Vivi.
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  2. ;) yay!!! I wuv <3 u Goldia!!
     
  3. Lol. :3

    I nuv you too! No, I lurv. :D
     
  4. Do you have any slots for characters?
     
  5. Johlee is prounounced like dees: Zh-o-lee.

    More like shh, but more... You know. ._.

    Monique: Moni-Q.

    Avery: Aver-ee

    Jennifer: Jen-ee-fer

    :0
     
  6. One spot I guess. :0
     
  7. Name: Kara Jenay

    Age: Your choice

    Looks: short coal black hair curled at the end, Dark green eyes, oval and pale face

    Personality: Ambitious, determined, will do whatever to get their way, hate to be lied to and can be very suspicious, will throw a tantrum when they find out they have been lied to

    Clothing: diamanté cross, fingerless gloves, always wears matching coloured shirt and pants

    Loves: Mystery and Secrets, Grape juice, bubble tea

    Nationality: Half Belgium half Korean


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  8. I shall start writing. >:L
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    Jennifer and went home, and I promised I'll sleep over tonight at her place. To waste some time I don't have, I thought of walking around in the park. I sat down on the bench and sighed. It was 6:00PM and my phone had died. I had no other ways of going home, except walking. It takes a 15 minute walk to get there from here, and I'm exauhsted. And supposedly, it was supposed to rain tonight.

    Typical.

    I decided to pass the time by looking at the stray cats and dogs. I'd hoped to raise a pet once, but my hopes were nothing but a failed pipe dream. My mom was extremely strict about having animals in the house. I tried getting a hamster, but my mom flushed it down the toilet.

    "..."

    A black cat walked past me, and I was admiring her silky black coat. Her eyes were emerald green, and she resembled a feline witch. I smiled at the thought and picked her up, stroking her. She was a precious little cat, until she scratched me.

    "Ow!"

    I dropped the cat, making it hiss at me and I looked at my bleeding cut. I winced and held my finger, trying to stop the blood from falling.

    *rustle* *rustle*

    Somebody was hiding in the bushes, and I lept back in surprise. Somebody walked out, and suddenly attacked me.

    "Gaaah! Get off!"

    The person climbed off of me. It was a man, around 17, around my age. He had black hair and his eyes were empty and dark.

    "... Sheesh..."

    I stood up anddusted myself, while he just stood there and gawked.

    "...?"

    "Oh... Nothing. I'm sorry, I was... Chasing me cat."

    He pointed to the hissing feline, and I just stared at him.

    He was gorgeous!

    I slapped myself mentally.

    Why the hell would I think about that in front of a stranger?!

    "Oh. That? She's... Pretty. What's her name?"

    "... It's Melancholy."

    "Melancholy eh...? So... You named her after the word meaning depression?"

    He nodded.

    "Depressed much?"

    He shook his head and laughed.

    "I thought it suited her, she always attacks people causing them to be angry. And it makes me depressed... I lose so many friends because of her."

    The cat hissed louder and scampered off.

    "Oh! Wait!"

    I ran for the cat, but the man grabbed my hand.

    "No need! It's okay, I can call her back anyways..."

    I raised my eyebrow.

    "Oh yes! I forgot. My name's Ace. You?"

    "Avery... Avery Fione."

    "Fancy name you got there!"

    "I guess..."

    "Let me see that cut..."

    He took my hand an looked at it, then shook his head.

    "I'm sorry... Did Melancholy do that?"

    I nodded.

    "Here. Let me do something..."

    He toom out a bandage and wrapped it around my finger, I smiled at him.

    "Oh right!"

    It had begun to rain, and I was already soaked. He was soaked too, and we tood there, lookkng at each other. I looked up and he looked down, and he was still holding my finger. My ring finger to be exact.

    "... I should get going..."

    "Nonsense. It's pouring right now! Hey, Avery... You're going to get sick standing alone in the rain. Come on... Let me get you home."

    "But... But it takes 15-"

    "minutes? Well why didn't you say so? Let's go to my place. It's just around the corner."

    I nodded. I was too cold to argue, and it would be nice to feel the warmth again.

    "... Are you alright?"

    I had just sneezed, and I nodded.

    "Kay then..."

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    Stranger danger stranger danger-
     
  9. I like! :D isn't this like your 30th fanfic? O.O lol but I love this one! <3
     
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    I woke up in a dark room, my face covered in sweat. I quickly banged my head on the wall behind me, and moaned as my head kept throbbing. I have no idea whatsoever of where I am, or what my surroundings are.

    "... Ohhh..."

    I kept moaning as it wad the only thing I could do to ease the pain. I kep sweating and my eyes were hurting as well. I laid back and collapsed onto the bed, now pulling the bedsheets as they were my only comfort for me. I was suffering. My heart was beating quickly, my sense of sight had left me. I coulsn't think straight, and my throat was burning.

    "..."

    Although I was blind, I could've made out a silouhette of a man. He was standing beside the doorway, and I could make out the silghtest smirk as he approached me.

    I was still moaning, it was the only thing I could do. I wanted to let the pain all out, instead of screaming.

    The man sat sat on the bed, and stroked my hair. I tried to pull away but realized that I couldn't. The man pulled something out, it looked like a capsule of some sort. But I was wrong.

    Inside was purple liquid, and when he had the chance, forced the liquid down my throat. I could tell this all by my sense of feel, but soon, everything went darker than it was before.
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    "Avery.. Avery.. Avery!"

    Somebody shook me awake, and I looked up. My body was drenched with sweat and I was panting. I was grabbing onto Ace's shirt, and my mouth was dry. I looked at him and smiled, then pulled away and hid myself under the covers.

    "You had fever... And apparently, a horrible nightmare."

    "Yes. It was horrible. Terrifying, actually."

    He smirked.

    "Come on. The rain has stopped. Let's take you home."

    I nodded as he pulled me up. I was wearing his clothes, since mine were wet. I was wearing his purple briefs and black tanktop, a perfect combo for one so cute.

    "Wow."

    Ace wad looking at me, and I looked back.

    "I mean-"

    "Spill the beans, Ace~!"

    "You look... Nice."

    I raised an eyebrow an puffed my cheeks. Is that what he was going to say?

    "Really? Nice?"

    "I meant gorgeous."

    We both smiled and I quickly got my dried clothes and changed into them.

    "Let's go. My motorbike is right over there."
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    Ace's motorbike was red, and had robo bunnies written on the back.

    "Robo... Bunnies?"

    "It's my obsession, the manga I'm reading."

    He was smiling, and I raised an eyebrow mentally.

    I was starting to think that he's gay.

    "Let's get you home."



    The ride was quiet. Nobody had said a thing, except me telling him the directions. I was silently humming to the tune, "Just be friends" by Luka Mengurine, a japanese singer from the music program Vocaloid. For a computer system, she sure sounded good.

    "... Avery, so..."

    We had arrived at my place, and I hopped off the bike.

    "Hmm?"

    "Is this... The last time we'll meet?"

    "Let's hope not..."

    We both exchanged sad glances before I walked in the door, and I soon regretted doing so.

    "... Lauren?!"
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  11. My bitch step sister was lying on the couch naked having a full makeout session with...

    "... Emment...?"

    I stormed over to the couch and saw Lauren snogging Emment, my ex.

    "Lauren are you insa-"

    Both of them quickly turned around and hid themselves using the bedsheet they had stolen... From my room.

    "WHAT THE FUCK YOU PIECE OF SHIT WHY THE HELL DID YOU GET MY BEDSHEET?!"

    I bitch slapped Lauren and grabbed Emment's hair and pulled. Hard. I pimp slapped him and dropped him on the floor, he, limping like a dog.

    As for Lauren, I kicked her in the breast and shoved them out of the door, both of them naked. I had locked both the back and front door, and slid down until my butt hit the floor. Soon, I passed out, my unconciousness blocking out the banging that could be heard, opposite of where I sat.
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    "She slept with Emment?!"

    I was at Jennifer's place, chewing gum, telling her the crazy story of what happened to me.

    "Are you serious?"

    I nodded.

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    Tired. Writer's block. :0
     
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  13. Continue!!!!!!! 
     
  14. I might continue this. It has a good story plot anyways. Won't let it go to waste. >:I
     
  15. good cuz u have let too many go to waste