Romeo and Juliet-Korea

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *TiffanyOdair (01), Dec 1, 2011.

  1. What happens when a good girl falls in love with a bad guy? Will their love be doomed forever,like Romeo and Juliet? Or will it be a happy ending?
    Based on The Great Queen Seon Deok.
    Set in ancient Korea.



    Prologue
    I was brought up by a master swordsman. I learnt all my skills from him. He was a man respected by all,but had gone missing for twenty years. Nobody forgot him,yet nobody recognised him.
    I was more of an errand boy,helping him get whatever he needed.
    Years passed,and soon,I was twenty years old. Nothing had changed much. I was still an errand boy. And he was still unknown to all.
     
  2. Oops I messed up the size. Ignore that please.
     
  3. This is basically a story version of the drama series 
    No copyright infringement intended. This story is meant for entertainment purposes only.
     
  4.  I love this!!! BuMp!! 
     
  5. Thank you!! 
    I love your story too 
     
  6. I'll probably update tomorrow or much later. My parents are nagging about 'playing' my iPod too much. (hey! I'm typing a story here! )
    Jk. I'll listen to my parents. 
     
  7. (lol thanks and I can't wait for ur update!)
     
  8. Thank you 
     
  9. Chapter One
    'Master' is a translation for 师父,which means a person who has taught that person.


    I trudged through the streets,glancing at the many stalls. My hand twitched.
    "No. Master would kill me if I stole something." I thought. I traipsed on and saw a girl being followed by palace guards everywhere.
    "What's that?" I mumbled. I sneakily followed behind them. Right before they were going to kill her from behind,I dropped my basket full of herbs and ran to the guards. I kicked some to the ground,I twisted their arms and kicked them right in the stomach. Before long,every guard was lying on the ground,writhing in pain.
    The girl looked at me with her big,round sapphire eyes and ran off. "Hmph,she must think I'm also a bad guy." I smiled a little. I turned around-and my basket was gone.
    "Just great. I'm going to get another scolding from Master when I get back home." I muttered angrily to myself.
    "You didn't get the herbs again?" Master shouted angrily. I replied,"I put it down for a moment to help a girl! She was almost killed by palace guards!" Master smirked,"You don't think I'll believe your tall tale,do you? Now get out and get those herbs now!"
    I trudged along the market streets again,having collected the herbs again. Except for wild ginger though. I could never find that. It was just too rare.
    As I walked back,I saw a long-haired girl buy some fabric from an old man. She looked up and met my gaze.
    Those blue eyes...could it be her again?
     
  10. Aww man! Why are my stories always failures?!? I always get no responses 
     
  11. I'll be updating tomorrow (about 14 hours later ) as I'm too tired now (it's 8:30 pm here in Singapore) and I don't wanna use my iPod until it's so late.  I'll be back with an update tomorrow!! 
     
  12. Chapter Two
    This chapter has nothing to do with the drama. I just thought it would be funny to include this ^^


    I hid behind a stack of straw and peeked out. It really was her! I smiled. She still dared to come out.
    Oh no! The straw was making me sneeze! "Ah...ah...achoo!!" I sneezed. She turned around and saw me. She giggled and walked towards me. Taking out her handkerchief,she said,"Here. You need it more than I do." I smiled and replied,"Thanks." Blushing,she hurriedly turned and left.
    "What a cute girl. I didn't even do anything and she's blushing." I smirked. I stood up and left.
     
  13. I'm so sorry,I'm not gonna continue this so...yeah I'm so sorry 
     
  14. update please
     
  15. You're reading my story?! 
    I thought I had no more readers 
     
  16. But really,I have no idea what to write...so I think I'll just stick to reading fanfics 