Blood On the Ice

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Nov 13, 2011.

  1. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. Pie! Thanks for adding Melody!! In the book she's really nice. But I like it how she died! Thanks! This made my day... Btw Melody's last name here was Clearwater... Lol Clearwater, Florida. Her last name in the book is Carver, so it's Melody Carver. 
     
  3. BUMP BUMP!!
     
  4. This is becoming a chat thread and it's hard to follow
     
  5. Agreed 
     
  6. BUMP
     
  7. Oh my god, if you dint update ill update for you
     
  8. NAO! I have a complicated storyline planned out!
     
  9. Then update it
     
  10. Bump! I WANT THAT UPDATE RIGHT NOW FRESH,WARM AND CRISP!!! 
     
  11. Sorry pie...I was saving the puppy 


    Update please. 
     
  12. And as the weeks passed, I refrained from killing anyone. I already had a page full of people dead, and I didn't want the police catching wind.
    Tugging at my plaid skirt, I strode through the front doors of my new school. There was a sea of blue and green plaid everywhere, the school colors almost drowning out the people wearing the uniforms. To my delight, nobody looked at me. I didn't want to be known. I wanted to be invisible. I wante-
    A force pushed me over, sending me to the floor and knocking me out of my thoughts. I saw a pair of black heels strut over to me, and I looked up. A girl smirked down at me, a wall of blonde hair covering one side of her face as she peered down.
    Smiling, she stuck out her hand, indicating I take it. But before I could reach her hand with mine, she quickly pulled it back.
    "Do me a favor, and watch where you're going." she sneered, whipping her hair over her shoulder before walking off.
    "Good one, Dolph!" a brunette next to the girl snickered.

    I felt an intense heat rush to my face, and I rushed down the hall, leaving my books where they were.
    That girl was going to die.
     
  13. Short update 
     
  14. So it took me a few days to read the entire thing but I love it!!!  bump!!
     
  15. 
     
  16. Yay!! Eighty something Pedo likes my story! 
    I adore ALL my fans 
     
  17. I love this story!!!
     
  18. ......who are you talking about,pie?