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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Simply_Fox (01), Dec 3, 2011.
-I eat quickly and head to the lake-
-i look at ember coming-
Are you alright D? -sits next to him-
Yeah.. I'm ok, just thinking..
Oh...-stays silent-
-I reach the lake and walk around it-
You hear that? -i say to ember- someone is up there..
-I sit in a tree-
-I look up- I didn't hear anything
No? -i swim to the surface-
-I accidentally sneeze-
-I sigh following Derek-
Ok that time I heard something -swims closer to Derek-
-I leap sheepishly from the tree landing in the lake-
You saw that? Someone is in the lake
-I dive under and grab Bridgets ankle-
-I scream- (meanie)
p) -I laugh and come up to the surface- Hello. Fine day isn't it?
What the..? -I dive in-
(scratch that)