Livi's POV I walked through the forest with my black docks crunching against the fallen auburn red and orange leaves. I had my back-pack on one of my shoulders the way I liked it. It was mostly quiet besides the field snakes hissing. But I didn't mind I was one of the very few people that ever walked here. They call it Devil death forest because many people have gotten murdered or killed here. Usually a place for terror. But I thought it was beautiful! And there ne'er seemed to be any bad feelings. Hmmm I-I- UH let's say have a gift. I can feel when something absoloutley terrible is going to happen and I'm always right. Same with if something good is going to happen. I walked watching my L mood necklace turn to a deep shade of red. I stopped dead in my tracks. And I latched my back pack on both my arms and ran to my dads house. Something was up. Not bad not good . But SOMETHING was out of place. That necklace? Was sorta like my sidekick if there was anything wrong or weird it would turn a different colour for everything. And deep red means something unusual. But not in a bad way cuz I didn't get the feeling. .... oh my god. I just got the feeling. I don't want to do this!!!! -close my eyes,squint them shut/squeeze my necklace and. In three seconds I'm at my dads house.
Dad are u okay? omg he's trapped in a huge block of ice with yellow stuff floating around it. OMG I scream. (pull yourself together livi! Satrinil could be trying to murder dad!) satrinil is dads twin brother. When they were born dad got all of his mothers sweetness and his brother got all of his dads horrible ways. Satrinil had always been jealous of Dad. Because he got more friends was popular and had many girls always. Because he was so nice! But u can imagine whT happened to Satrinil. I rushed out the door to the ToadShop where an old family friend. Mr.Davini works. Or owns... Its filled with magical things like spell dust and wands. But u can't use them so most people think it's junk. But I don't go there for the things. I go there for advice and to drop of a little money sometimes ( there not really a rich family. Since I said there store doesn't sell well.) and because Mr.Davini's son is so cute But that's not why I'm there. I'm there for asking Mr.Davini if he could take a look at dad and what happened to him. Plus I can only go there because he's the one of the few people that can have a look at dad because these things happen all the time with us. And because He's also one of the few people that know dad and I aren't humans.
Tomorrow it's 11:07 early but I wanna sleep! Thx for bumping it's a better success then once upon a crime
Mr.Davini? Are u there? I step on the creaky stair and walk up the steps. One two three. Hello? Mr.Davini???? No answer I look at the spell dust and books. Hey livi. I turn around. OHH hey Tyler. I blush... Umm is ur dad home? Tyler:nope he went to your house. Didn't u see him? Livi:Ehh? No that's really strange I went to tall to him. Because my dad is trapped in this weird blue thing. Tyler: ? Livi: come with me. GrBs Tyler by the arm but misses a little and grabs his hand. ! Oh. Umm. I look at tylers arm and make sure to grab it. Tyler: ignores the fact livi just grabbed my hand. OHH it was a mistake. nvm.. Come on livi! Let's go! Livi: feels a pulse. In her hand. Someethiing ba-dd. Ignores it. Something bad already happened livi I must help my dad. Tyler and livi rush over to lives house... Tyler: OH MY GOD! Livi: rushes to dad. Dad you'll be fine. I'll help you. I whisper to the blue thing. I touch the blue thing. OW IT BURNS! Tyler: whoa! My god Livi: I brought u here to ask u, Do u have any idea what this is? Tyler: A pretty good one. See this blue thing seems to be very hot. Yes? Livi: yeahhh Tyler: so its not fire or else your hand would be melting. Livi: no I'm not affected to heat remember? Tyler: what? Livi: wait Mr.Davini err ur dad never told u? Tyler: what! Livi: my dad is an angel, that's why he's good and his brother is the last descendent of the devil. That's where he got his brutal ways from. Tyler: What.... U are what I think bling to a dreyk jshdusms. -PASSES OUT- ~ So need more? Bump meh!
Livi: Tyler? Are u okay??? Tyler: Opens eyes- GET AWAY FROM ME U MONSTER! ARE U DRUGGED OF COIRSE UR A HUMAN! Livi: -frowns- Tyler I I i thought u would understand. Why are u like this? Why don't u believe me? Tyler: -gives myzelf a face palm- livi jeez stop making this up? Why are being such a wacko? Livi: don't believe me? Tyler: well obviously livi! My gawd! Livi: hmm. Fine then. -snaps my fingerz- red stuff forms around me. Tyler: what? Nice magic trick. Listen can we PLEASE not fight? We need to find a logical explanation to this. Before I was saying that since your hand isn't burning but u felt it. It mist be dry ice. Livi: no we are not done discussing this. I guess if u don't believe me then were not friends. Tyler: well that's a releif. I never even wNted to be your friend Livi:TYLER! HOW COULD U SAY SOMETHING LIKE THAT! Tyler: idk. -shrugs- I always thought u were weird. Livi: but so!? I am so mad right now leave my house NOW! Tyler: freezes Livi: what? Tyler: frozen Livi: -shudders- aww man. Not now! -looks at necklace- a black. A black? Oh my god that means that... SATRINIL! SHOW YOURSELF RIGHT NOW!
Your story is really cute-it's written like a script but it's really cute when written that way
Satrinil: AHHHH u caught me! Livi: *trembles* I'm not scared of you! Satrinil: well dear niece I'd like to believe u but u are trembling and I control people to fear me. Livi: u can't control! U are so idiotic Satrinil: really? Well how bout I show u this! *snaps fingers*- Mr.Davini is standing there- Livi: AHA! I knew u were behind this. Listen I would be stupid and say ur not going to get away with this and all that sh*t cut the crap! K? I know u did this and I'm sorry u can't be nice. It's not your fault. Satrinil: u don't know the power of the dark side. Livi: u have been watching too many star wars movies. Satrinil: Indeed, alas they are most certainly right! Livi: ? Satrinil; aha yes! I can control people it's quite enjoyable! But I can't control u and your father much because u are too strong. But I have been practicing so I can make u scared. Which is good enough for me! Livi: Kay listen u as*hole why don't u quite messing with people and learn to control yourself.. Satrinil: hmmm smart girl! U think your tough. Yes u may be! But your loved once aren't. Mr.Davini! Come here. Mr.D: *gasps* LIVI HELP! *turns to Satrinil* I shall never obey you. Satrinil: oh but u shall! Haha. *Runs to Mr.Davini* -grabs arm- Mr.D: *screams in pain* Livi: MR.DAVINI! uhm!!!!!! What do I do what do I do!!! Satrinil: *turns around to livi* FREEZE! Livi: *clenched fists* -closes eyes- Satrinil: *frowns* hmm I must keep practicing. Anyway will u shut up! So I can hurt Mr.Davini! Livi: ya like that's gonna happen. Satrinil: *snaps fingers* Livi: *duck tape is around her mouth* :O! Satrinil: *smirks* -turns back to Mr.Davini. Looks in eyes. YOU WILL... umm Livi: *puls off duck tape* AWWSH*T! That burns! Satrinil: aha! U shall put duck tape around livi's hands and feet and mouth. And slap her. Mr.D: of course! *goes to livi* Livi: WHAT THE HELL! Satrinil: you see livi? Now its that time of year when I ask u to join the darkside. Livi: *shakes head* Satrinil: but I will do anything u want. Livi: *rolls eyez* Satrinil: *snaps fingers* duck tape is off her mouth. Livi: anything? Satrinil: *hope is rising up* devilish grin. Anything! Livi: let my father go. Satrinil: Nice try. There must be something else! Something that your heart wants that it needs so much it's toxic! Your addicted. U need something! Livi: well.. Satrinil: ??? Livi: Make Tyler Love Me.
Satrinil: anything for you! Mwahahah Livi: wtf Satrinil: but u must join me the devil! Livi: for love... Satrinil: yep come with me... Livi: *looks down at necklace* -sighs- ~three seconds later~ Livi: this lair is pretty weird Satrin: *picks up a shrunken head with half the blue heD curled up in an unsettling wY* Livi: Satrinil: ANYWAY let's get to it. *Hands livi the potion* Livi: *wearily takes potion* This doesn't look like anything Mr.Davini would have at the Toad Shop. Satrinil: *looks at livi* uhm of COurse I use black magic I've gotten the hang of it and there ar cheats here and there... Livi: I see Satrinil: *looks at clock* listen u must do what I need u to do or that potion will be gone. Livi: *grips bottle* (?) Satrinil: listen closely Livi: Satrinil? I don't need my hearing aids anymore. I think since I'm sitting five inches away from you I can hear you. Satrinil: NO! shut up u brat! They will find us. Livi: L aw mann not a bad thing. What could be more worse than having to go to Satrinil for help? Satrinil: Yes they. The dark shadows. They can do whatever they like. Murder Send to me Possesses them Make them feel pain Anything really. Livi: omg Satrinil: take the potion and go. THEN you must come back or Your dad gets killed. Livi: uhm.... Uhm..... *looks at necklace* Satrinil: I'll be taking that! *smirks* /grabs livis mood necklace/ Livi: NO GIVE IT BACK Satrin: don't try and test me Livi: *steps* Satrinil: *flames burn from hand* -laughs as the necklace incinerates- Livi: *shoves arm* [color=navy blue] a huge wind appears [/color] Satrinil: do better than that. *disappears* Livi: *sits on floor* what have I gotten myself into? stupid Tyler none of this would have happened of he was so beautiful!!! *stands up* well I've got nothing to lose. *walks outside and teleports to home* -------------------------------------------