poem-Suicide

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *pikachu99 (01), Dec 1, 2011.

  1. I slit my wrists
    I slit my throat
    Then all of a sudden
    I started to choke

    But i had to keep my heartbeating
    So death wouldn't start feeding
    On my soul
    On my hate

    On my love
    And on my fate
    Blood poured
    My heart slowed

    I took my last breaths
    As death won again


    Tell me what yuh think cuz i just made it up
     
  2.  this is really hard for me to read my one friend did this and died just last month.

    It's real good, and painful 
     
  3. Im sorry Alida.. Its how i feel now so.. Yeah.
     
  4. Thts really good
     
  5. I like the poem