What do you think?

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by *Shorty2012 (01), May 25, 2011.

  1. I made 2 poems and I like never make any unless it's an assignment. I did these cause of the emotions I was feeling, so what do you think of them?

    The other one...

    Alone

    I go through the woods
    I see the trees surrounding me
    I feel alone but I'm not
    I don't know why but there's something else
    Something with me
    There's nothing just trees and animals
    Then I see something
    I run over to it as it goes faster away
    Soon I'm almost to it but it disappears
    Frowning I walk back to the place I was once before
    Then I see it again
    'WAIT!!' I yell
    It looks back and stops
    I run over to it
    We walk to the woods together no longer alone.
     
  2. Awwwww this thread never got sa-
    FIRST BITCHES!
     
  3. Bump because this thread deserves a chance to live again
     
  4. Shorty I miss you
     
  5. I'm gonna try and convince her to come back