Re:once upon a crime2

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Black_White- (01), Nov 28, 2011.

  1. I turned around to talk to the girl. "my name is pretin, and If everyone is worried about me, they should see te upstairs bathroom."she told me. "Come on let's go" I grabbed Ali's arm and we ran upstairs.... With the crowd that had gotten even bigger including Cornelia and her dads news crews. Daphne helped Pretin up the stairs incase she fainted again. Ali blocked the door and closed it so the news crews couldn't get it, we didn't need this to be top story of the week. Daphne climbed up the stairs and pushed the news crews(NC) out of the way so her and Pretin could get through the doorway. They locked the door and Pretin sat on the bed feeling light headed. Ali ran and opened the door. "O MY GOD MOUFLON COME QUICK" I ran to the bathroom in the bedroom and what I saw was my enemy Tatri Lying ok the floor. As soon as I could say anything she woke up and threw up in the toilet.

    "Tatri? I know we are enemies and we have our differences but u need to tell us what's going on. Is something wrong? Your badly bruised and beaten. Do we need to call the cops?" I asked her. "Mouflon look in the shower!" she started crying. Alarmed I opened the blue tiled shower. One that u couldn't see through. And I saw Tatri's sister all bloody and her eyes rolled to the back of her head. "AHHHH! Lili!" I fall to the ground next thing I hear is the door opening someone saying that he could pick locks and NC's flashing cameras and then nothing.
     
  2. Read number one Once Upon A Crime! and I needed to make a new post cuz I couldn't find my old one! Tell me if u wNt more it's a pretty long story
     
  3. If I get A bump I'll continue
     
  4. BUMP B**** BUMP! (xP)
     
  5. I wake up in Daphnes bed with NC hanging around still. Most of them left though. Then I think of Tatri and Lili. I jump out of bed and look out the window. An ambulance has arrived. I walk into the hall. And see Tatri hanging around by herself. "Tatri what happened?" I asked. "Don't play dumb u bltch I KNOW what u did I saw u with my own black eyes. You better watch ur back u Evil àss." She says to me with a disgusted look on her face. "what?Tatri what are u talking about?" but she already left. "Hey May." I don't need to see who it is. It's the only person that calls me by my old nick name. It's Spinger my best guy friend. "Spinger! I'm so confused!" what's happening?why is Tatri mad at me?she's acting like I killed Lili!" I lean in to him and hug him. He blushes. We have know eachother ever since I moved to Deap City. When I was two we became best friends. He confessed that he loved me a few months ago but it didn't change the fact we still cared for eachother. U know friend like. "Well May it could be your "issue" and u know I'm right." I pull away and stare at his Brown eyes. "oh my god your probably right!" I burst in tears and run downstairs. I can't deal with my issue right now.
     
  6. Find out what the "issue" is! I need fans and bumps!
     
  7. I heard Spinger chasing after me. I knew we were going to have to discuss this but I couldn't not now not at a time like this. "may! Please I'm sorry I brought that up! But we can fix it!" I ran to an empty room in the basement. I made sure no one was there. "Spinger. I know ur right. I know why Tatri is mad at me and I am really mad at myself right now." I looked at him tears streaming down my face. Because those issues I had? It was a personality disorder which means one personality can let's say.. Dance for three hours and the other personality would have no idea why they would be so tired! So I killed Lili! But that's why I didn't k ow I did it it's my disorder! I wish they would find a cure to help me!

    Narrator: What Mouflon(may) doesn't know is that when she was born she didn't have the disorder. But a doctor that lost their mind injected her with it when she was in the hospital when She broke her ankle. Yes he did inject it into her but he also injected a slow dying poison that would kille her in 16 years. And I'm not the only person that knows this. Spinger knows too!
     
  8. I'll update but I need bumps!
     
  9. OMG PLZ TELL EVERYONE TO READ!