The Mystery Adventure

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -MsChocoLatte-, May 21, 2011.

  1. Bump....Moreeee
     
  2. The next morning....

    "Everybody rise and shine!Get your fat ass and move it!"Danzo said.

    Everybody stared at Danzo and continue to sleep.

    "=_= OMG WHAT TIME DO YOU ALL WANT TO WAKE UP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE JUNGLE OF DEATH?!"Danzo said again.

    After 5 minutes of Danzo mumbling,everyone finally woke up.I went in front of Danzo and slapped him"Can you be quiet already?!"I said.
    "扫你一巴飞掉!(slap you and you will fly off to nowhere)"

    Suddenly,it was so silent.We heard a soft melting sound calling from nowhere,we followed the sound.Step by step,we saw a gigantic waterfall.
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  3. The waterfall splashing down so strongly but the water was as clear as crystal.

    "This is Paradise!"Qin said.

    Everyone was so amazed about the crystal clear water,They started to take off their shirt and jump into the water(Boys only for sure).So me,Qin,Nikki and Jasmine(JJ) take a bottle full of the water and drank it,it was so refreshing and sweet!

    Suddenly,Danzo shouted!

    "Help!Help!I'm drowning!"

    Thizzle quickly swim towards Danzo.Unfortunately,they two was drowning down because the strong splashing.We all panic,Jasmine doesn't know how to swim,Qin was a beginner for swimming,I am the only one who know how to swim but not so good too,so now it's on me.When I almost jump in the waterfall,someone dash in before I jump,it was two men surely.I kept looking and wondering"who are they?"
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  4. Standing on the slippery rock wondering,when I was going to step on the muddy land,you know what happened?I dropped in the water too. "OH SHIT"I shouted and dropped into the strong waves. I was looking down in the water it was no end in the deep blue fountain,I saw some creatures that I never seen,their skin colours are so gorgeous and attractive,it would be great if I could have it.A strong wave dash by,I can't control my body from floating away.The wave stop and it was so cold in here,I hold my breath.....

    So I try to swim up to the surface quickly.In the middle of the water,I saw a gigantic creature,it swam as fast as a killer whale towards my directions.I was like "OH NO NOT AGAIN!!!AHHH!!" so now my legs are kicking till I can't felt them,looking down I saw it still chasing me!I swam as fast as I can,suddenly my leg is becoming so pain,I can't move it,oh my god I'm going to die so young I thought.
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    Another splashing sound came in the water,I don't dare to open my eyes to see what will happen,am I dead yet?Someone is pulling me out of the water.

    "zoey,zoey are you there?can you here me?"

    I slowly open my pair of sky blue eyes.In front of me it was Qin.So I answered her:"ya....Is Danzo and Thizzle rescued?"

    "Ya they were rescued by your dad and brothers"Qin said.

    So I ask who saved me,I was thinking it was surely my dad,but when I saw him it wasn't my dad it was a muscular man.Seeing him from head to toe,his muscular arm,his six pack,omg he surely trained himself.He walked to me and ask:"are you ok miss?"I nodded my head.When I saw my dad and brothers I was extremely happy,I almost blow myself up!
    "Dad!Chris!Moo!"I shouted.
    I rushed myself to them and hugged them.I was bursting and tears.
    "Where have you all been?"I asked

    Chris wipped my tears off my face and smile.

    "We were stuck in this island like you my little angle"zuess said.

    "We were on the plane and a lighting suddenly strike on us,luckily we didn't die"moo added.

    "Mum and i missed you guys,living in the house without you all,there aren't any happiness,when you all are gone there aren't any laughter any more,our house became black and White after you all are gone.
     
  5. Bursting in tears*
     
  6. "Ok,so how are we going to get out of this island?"moo said.

    "We must get over to the other side off the island,a boat will go there once a month,maybe we will have a chance to get off this island and go home."Jasmine said.

    "Wow we are just at the ended of the mountain we need to get started or it will be to late!"Danzo said.

    "We all know what to do duh =_="I said.

    So everyone waved at the fun time over and started to race time.Time flying so fast,just a wink it was the second day.

    La La La so a live story started.....

    On a night when everyone was sleeping,I was sitting at the riverside looking at those pure beautiful bright stars,counting them but for sure I will never finish counting them.

    "10,11,12,13,14,15,16....."I was counting.

    "So what are you counting?"the man who saved me asked.

    "Oh I'm counting stars!I haven't asked what is your name anyway?"I asked.

    "Oh my name is Isaac,so what is yours?"he asked.

    "you can call me zoey"I said.

    I genteelly sat on his lap.He pushed my hair off my face.We both looking in each other eyes.His eyes were as green as nature.My cheeks were as red as a red apple.
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  7. "What are you two doing?"Chris asked.

    We quickly say "Nothing!Just watching the stars!"

    "You two better get some rest,it's very late already"He said again.

    So we all went back to sleep.
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    Some water was sprinkled on my face,"WTF IS YOUR PROBLEM DUDE?!"I shouted.

    "Oh you don't want me mumbling so I sprinkle water on your face"Danzo said.

    Everyone shook their head after seeing Danzo.

    "What?!"he said.

    Nobody is going to answer his dumb question.

    "Ok fine so you all don't want to tell me ei =_="Danzo said again.

    "BLAH BLAH BLAH SHUT UP ALREADY"Nikki said furiously.

    So we walk up the sliding mountain.They are a lot of wild berries that when you saw it you want to grab it and put it in your mouth straightly.When Thizzle reached out to grab those delicious berries,Jasmine blocked his hand and said"Those are extremely poisonous berries eat it and die between 5seconds,I say again SECONDS"

    "OMG,damn you delicious looking berries =_="Thizzle said.

    "Hahaha you lucky ass,Jasmine saved your life!"Moo said.

    A monkey grabbed the berries and ate it in front of us,after a few second,DEAD.

    "Ok that is scary O_O"Thizzle said.

    Everyone was looking at the dead monkey and freak out.
     
  8. Dead Monkey!I Loved Monkeys Bump
     
  9. 

    Thanks dan
     
  10. Thanks for bumping dan
     
  11. So we continued over path.Walking more into the jungle(haven't reach the mountain end)we saw a lot of venomous plant,some sharply spike plant;in another side,we saw some special shaped plants too.There was a plant I liked most,it has rainbow colour and glitters,it's so beautiful,it's a heavenly gift!I called it Peacock Peddles.

    There was a massive amount of wild plants in our way,so we cut someone off so it doesn't block us.After all does cutting we saw a castle in the middle of a jungle.Everyone was curiously so we went in there and discover what kind of castle is this,it's almost night too so everyone could surely rest there too.

    "Wow!this door is humongous!The door height is like my house height,omg"Thizzle said.

    "Can someone give me a hand?this door is very hard to open!"Isaac said.He was holding a log to bang open it.So all the boys helped hit the door open too.

    When the door opened,the castle it's like a royal king palace!The silky curtain,the shiny window,the smooth and slippery floor with a red carpet on!

    "OMG I want to live here!"Qin shouted.

    "We too! XD" everyone said.

    "Ok let's see what is in this castle"Zuess said.

    So me and Qin went upstairs,Danzo and Thizzle checked the kitchen,Zuess,Chris and Moo went to the basement(if I didnt guess wrong ;) )
     
  12. I want to check out the master bedroom
     
  13. Thanks for bumping Violet

    Dandirty
     
  14. Just walking in the hall,OMFG HOW MANY ROOM IS THERE?!I think when we check all the room it will be next morning already XD.

    "Ok,let's see if there is enough bed for everyone"I said.

    "Ok!let's go and check now!"Qin said.

    I opened the door on the right,OMG it's so big it's like 2x of the mastered room! The floor is covered with a dark red carpet,there is a gorgeous painting on the wall,the person looks like me,it kinda creep me out a little.THE BED OMG AM I DREAMING?!I ALWAYS WANTED THIS BED,soft as cotton,cool as ice,beautiful as an angel,it is a dark purple and golden bed,it has curtain to cover it up.It was for two people to sleep in only(thinking about something dirty).Qin opened the left door,it's like an antique room.Golden carpet,Golden bed,Golden wall,Golden lights.
    After opening 4 doors,it's enough for us all to sleep in.
     
  15. Wah All Golden IF Me I Steal Everything Movable!
     
  16. Greedy thief