Killing For Love

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *TiffanyOdair (01), Nov 25, 2011.

  1. Would you believe I am a murderer? Probably not. But I am.
    Yeah,so I kill only to save someone. But so what? That doesn't change anything. Just because my beloved is locked up in a dark cave doesn't mean I can kill. Or does it...?
    I am Reina Kojima. The ruthless killer.




    It all started the night of our first kiss. Yeah,sappy,I know,but this is real. That night,we were sitting on the ledge of a cliff. It was unknown to most,but he knew it. He took me there that night,and revealed its beauty to me.
    He stroked my long brown hair,telling me I looked just like a princess. All of a sudden,he kneeled down and asked me to be his girlfriend.
    I kneeled down too,cupped his face and looked into his deep hazel eyes. "If you don't mind me,"I whispered,kissing him gently.
     
  2. Sorry it's really short! I have to go but hope you like it! I will be back later(hopefully)
     
  3. P.S. Reina's boyfriend is addressed as 'he'. His name will be revealed in due time 





    Just then,the starry night sky darkened to a onyx black sky. It gave off an ominous feeling. We looked up and saw a dark figure leaping towards us. That person shot a poison arrow at me. " No!"he yelled. He shielded me from the mysterious person and got shot instead. I could only watch in horror as he keeled over,clutching his chest and the arrow. The person landed right behind me and whispered into my ear,"Don't move him if you want him alive. Follow my instructions,or else he will die. Only I have the antidote." I nodded.
    That man tied me with a rope and blindfolded and gagged me. Soon,I found myself in a dark chamber. In front of me was a throne. A man,hidden in the shadows,was sitting on it. The lights brightened and it revealed a long-haired man on the throne. His hair was blonde and he motioned for his men to bring me forward. I struggled against them,but it was no use. My captors were too strong for me. The man introduced himself as Izumi. Izumi told me that he was locked in a dark cave-like chamber in his palace. The only way to get him out was to first kill the people Izumi wanted dead and I was the person wanted for the murderer.
    I had to give in to Izumi's demand. I had to keep him alive. But how? How could I kill innocent people just to save him?
     
  4. Ok it's really terrible  It's my first time writing a long chapter story and...so far I think I'm doing a terrible job  Sorry if this is a really horrible story to read 
     
  5. This is awesome! What are you talking about?

    In fact, it's so awesome that I'd like you to read my story, "Positive or Negative Feeling", and give me feedback
     
  6. 'His' POV
    I awoke to find myself in a cave. I was bound and gagged. There was no way I could escape. I mean,how could I escape when I can't even find the opening? I shook my head. Where was Reina? "No! NO!!"I yelled. Reina couldn't be taken away by the bad guys! She couldn't suffer under their cruel hands! My shoulder-length hair(the upper part was tied)was soon soaked from my perspiration. I closed my eyes and prayed that Reina was alright.




    First time writing from a guy's point of view 
     
  7. Really? Thank you 
     
  8. Izumi's POV
    "Ha,so now they've brought a young teenage girl to me? What a bunch of useless fools." I thought. I told my men to bring her forward.
    "Oh my goodness...a beauty!" I thought. Her hazel eyes glowered as she glared at me. I leaned forward and cupped her face in my hand. Bringing her face close to mine,I said,"So you've come to my lair?" She struggled against my grip and yelled,"I only came here to save my boyfriend! If you think I'll be your girl,stop dreaming!" I gripped her more tightly. "You'd better stop making me angry,or else I might decide not to give you the antidote." I watched in delight as I saw her eyes widen and her face take on a defeated and submissive look. "Decided to be my servant? Just as well. I have a little job for you." I showed her my 'Kill List'. "You'll start off by killing these few people. If you don't, you know what'll happen to your beloved." As I threw her to the floor,I grinned evilly. Her boyfriend wouldn't have good days-whether she obeyed me or not. But she was not to know that.




    Hope this POV is okay  There will be a Part Two too! 
     
  9. Izumi's POV (Part Two)
    I called my men to lead me to his chamber. It was hidden in the depths of my palace. I stepped in. My men removed his gag. "Just because I healed you doesn't mean I'll be nice to you." I said darkly. "Who are you? What have you done to Reina?" His voice rang out in the chamber. I responded,"How sweet. A man worrying about his girlfriend the moment he can speak." I heard him struggling in his chains. "What do you want?" He yelled in the darkness.
    "What do I want? Oh,nothing. I just want to achieve my goals. Using your girlfriend,of course." "What? No! You can't!" I smirked,"Oh,can't I?" "Use me instead! Please don't hurt Reina!" he yelled. "Oh,not only will I hurt her,I will hurt you if you don't cooperate." I grinned. "I'll never cooperate! I will never serve someone like you!" he yelled in fury.
    "Then you don't mind if I hurt Reina?" I asked smugly. "No! Don't hurt her! I'll cooperate. Just don't hurt her. Please." His tone of voice changed from angry to sad and quiet.
    Ah,love. I hate it,but it helps me every time.




    Confession here:Izumi is a sadist! 
     
  10. I'm not perverted okay? I just mean he's so evil he likes to see others kneel to him(isn't that a sadist...?!)
     
  11. Aww thanks  a 'bump' means a lot to me 
     
  12. I will update this tomorrow. I'm too tired today 
     
  13. lol I liked the last line on the last update
     
  14. Bump!  very interesting stuff! 
     
  15. Bump!!!!!!
     
  16. Reina's POV
    *I'm back!! *




    I was led,blindfolded,to the main door of the palace. My blindfold was ripped off all of a sudden and I was greeted by a blinding flash of light. The city!
    "Do not forget what you are supposed to do,Reina." The assassin smirked and disappeared into the building. I peered dejectedly at the list. Ten names,all written in blood,were listed neatly on it. I glanced at the first name. Taylor Summers. My first target.