The orphan

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Jazaraztaz (01), Oct 29, 2011.

  1. yay, I'm in!
     
  2. Bump bump bump bump bump bump bump!
     
  3. I opened the door nervously.
    I studied the young girls face her long black hair complemented her face nicely. She glanced up and met my gaze.
    Her eyes were beautiful pools of green. She blushed slighty when she realised i was staring.

    "oh sorry"
    I chuckled tensly while rubbing the back of my head.
    She smiled politley then nodded.
    "hello sir my name is Isabella Ness, im here to fufill your services"
    She bowed her head.
    "oh"
    I replied surprised.
    "im Adrean Parker"
    "plesure to meet you Mr Parker"
    She extended her hand for a hand shake.
    "please call me Adrean"
    I met her halfway.
    "please come inside ill show you your dorm"

    She scuttled closley behind me admiring the architecture.
    "this place is wonderful"
    She smiled.
    "isnt it just"
    I giggled.

    "right, here is your dorm. Your one floor above the girls and two doors down from my bedroom. So if you need anything im right down the hall"
    i nodded at her and pulled open the door.
    Her jaw dropped in amazement.
    "oh my lord this room is beautiful Mr- ah Adrean, you can even see the lake"
    I smiled brightly as i watched her prance around the room.
    "ill let you settle in for a bit then ill be back to give you, your first task"
    She nodded in agreement.

    I shut the door gently behind me and took a big releasing breath.
    "for a maid she is very beautiful, and so young too she must be the same age as me"
    I snickered at myself.
    "dont get any ideas Adrean. "
    I cursed at myself.
     
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  5. I love it please write back
     
  6. Yay! You captured my charcter purr-fectly! 

    This is so AW-wait-for-it-ESOME!
     
  7. Im glad you guys like it 
    A big thank you to all my readers i love you guys.
    And to the people who gave me characters all of you are dope 

    Ill update soon after dinner lol 
     
  8. I quickly ducked downstairs to finish Jerry's drink then took it upstairs to her room.

    I opened the door to find Isabella standing over her bed with a hand on Jerry's head and a hand on her diamante cross she was mumbling something under breath and burning some kind of esence in a plate.

    "excuse me"
    I harshly scoffed.
    Isabella turned to me with suddenly placing her hands directly by her side and ducking her head.
    "im-im so-rry Adrean"
    She sulked.
    "what are you doing in here?"
    I retorted.
    "i heard a girl sobbing, i followed the voice and ended up here"
    "please gather your things and leave"
    I said sternly.
    She looked up at me and i could see the plead in her eyes. She nodded and slipped away silently.

    I sighed with relief as i opened the window to air out the room. Letting the fresh crisp air whip gently at my face.
    I then concentrated my attention to Jerry.
    "im so sorry sweetheart"
    I glared at her angel like face.
    "a-a-adrean?"
    She slowly opened her eyes.
    "you just rest okay Jerry!"
     
  9. Bump. This gonna be LEGEN-wait for it and I hope you're not lactose intolerant cause the next word is-DAIRY!
     
  10. BUMPee!! Update pwease!!