senior year

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Fancy_Mia (01), Nov 19, 2011.

  1. Part One

    Mel : smooth brown skin, Deep brown eyes, toned body and black faded hair.

    First day of senior year.

    "Mel get up or you'll be late to school." his mother yelled from downstairs.

    Mel got outta bed, hopped in the shower got dressed and went down stairs.

    "Morning Ma." he said.
    "Good-morning son, you ready for ur first day of senior year?!" she asked while serving him breakfest.
    "I guess, catch u later Ma, im off." he said.
    "byee sweetie have a good day." his mother said.

    he grabbed his backpack and got into his black honda and headed to school.

    he was walking down the hall to meet his buddies when he heard...

    "Meeeeeel!" a female voice
    he turned around
    "hey Taylor" he said.
    "hey baby did u miss me?!" she said
    "of course I did." he said giving her a kiss.
    "I missed u too, I gotta go catch up with Amanda, see u at lunch." she said running off.

    thanks for reading. let me knoe if u like it. 

     
  2. Really good so far
     
  3. bump BUMP 
     
  4. Pweaaase bump!!!
     
  5. as I walked to class I saw my buddies standing by the door waiting.

    "yo dude wats up?!" Brent said.
    "not much I guess same school different year." Mel said.
    "so ur going to basketball tryouts after school today right?!" Mike said.
    "yea, I'll be there! as if u guys could win anyway games this season without me." Mel said.
    "haha dnt get cocky bro, I heard there was a new guy trying out that just transferred here. word around school is he's pretty good." Josh said.
    "yea well even then I'm sure we dnt play the same position and even if we do, I've been a starter on varsity going on three years, there's no way imma let some new guy take my spot if u catch my drift." Mel said.
    "yea I feel u bro." Brent said.
    "we will catch up with u later, just thought u should know whats up." yea thanks man. there's the bell gotta go, see y'all at lunch." Mel said

    man I can't wait for lunch hour. it's the first time we get off campus lunch and all seniors get an extra 30 mins. Mel thought. not to mention I want to see my girl and catch up with the guys... drifting off into thought he was snapped back into reality when..

    "Mr. Cox are you paying attention?!" Mrs. Thomas said.
    "yes ma'am." he said.
    "okay please answer the following question."

    Ringggg

    "oh I would love to Mrs. Thomas but there's the bell." he said.
    "lucky for u this time young man." she said.
     
  6. thanks for reading if u like it please let me knoe 

     
  7. well i don't really like it


    I love it
    Mia your talented don't let anybody ever tell you otherwise
     
  8. Great so far! Keep going
     
  9. Lunch Hour

    Mel walked towards the parking lot to meet up with Taylor and his friends. every year at lunch the seniors meet up with their clicks to figure out where they are going.

    he noticed the his buddies first.

    "wat up Mel?!" Brent said giving him a high 5.
    "Yo dude where to?!" Mike said.
    "idk yet man let me check with my girl first." Mel said as he spotted Taylor headed his way.

    she was so beautiful almost every guy wanted her. Long jet black hair, green eyes, slim and yellow toned skin. she was wearing a navy blue dress with brown boots.

    "hey babe! where do u wanna go for lunch?!" Mel said grabbing her close and giving her a kiss.
    "hey baby I missed u, um the girls were talking about checking out that new pancake house that serves breakfast 24/7 " Taylor said. "alright cool, let me check with my boys and see if they want to go."

    Brent and and Mel have been best friends since kindergarten. They also lived right up the street from each other and played on the basketball team together.
    Brent was currently dating Taylor's best friend Amanda.

    "Ayo Y'all wanna go to the pancake house with Taylor, Amanda,Heather and Brittany?!" Mel shouted. "that's cool with me." Josh shouted back.
    "alight cool me, Tay, Brent and Amanda can go in my car. Mike, Josh, Heather and Britt can go in Mike's car. Mel said. "cool man we'll meet y'all there." Mike said.

    bump if u like it thanks 


     
  10. Bump

    I  it! Keep going but next time try to use "You" and don't forget capital letters.