Chapter 1 [Serenity's P.O.V] Well,Today was the first day going to school with mortals. The food was regurgitating,although my classes were tolerable. I realize I had almost every class with a certain mortal by the name of Galkhen. He's as tall as I am,and he plays baseball. He seems to stare at me....a lot. Maybe somebody told him I'm not human,but I'm not jumping to conclusions just yet. He asked of my name. I answered with the name of Nightshade,My code name. He asked if we could become friends,and I said I would give him an answer tommorow. The thing is,no mortal,and I mean no mortal has made me feel odd inside.... Ever. Chapter 2 [Galken's P.O.V] Food at school sucked. Go figure. I might just make the school year because I have all my classes with Nightshade. Her black hair coveres her right eye....her eyes are a pretty silver color. It's killing me not to turn red in her presence. I can't say I love her, I mean...I CAN'T TALK TO HER WITHOUT LOOKING STUPID AND STUTTERING. We are the exact same height and she runs track. Somebody she hangs out with,Gianna told me I make her feel weird. I wish I could figure out what kind of "Weird" it was. Dear god....HELP! More?
Chapter 3 Problem? [In General] She tightened her tie on her white dress shirt and slipped her belt into the loopholes. Her jet black hair,hence the name nightshades coming. She put her mascara on,batting her eyelashes and it left little slash marks. Galkhen sat on the cold, Icy concrete in his Bulldogs sweatshirt. Her night black nails ran through his dirty blonde hair. "Nightshade?" he asked turning around. "Hello Galkhen." she said flashing a warm smile. "Ready for first period?" he asked her standing up and slinging his backpack over his shoulder. Her face flushed red as he looked at her with his sweet green eyes. "Nightshade?" "I'm okay....Let's head to the door." she said not making eye contact. He grabbed her hand as she went to walk. She would never act this strange. She tugged hard for him to let go. "There is something bugging you,Isn't there?" he asked. [Serenity's P.O.V] No matter how hard I pulled he would let me go! "I'm fine Galkhen." He raised a brow at me in doubt. "No,there is something wrong." I blew up red. My hand was in his....Our faces were close... I felt....Like I wanted to do something more than just stand there.
Finishing 3 "Nightsh-" "That's not my name...." "What?" "That's not my name....." "What is it?" "Serenity...." He blinked. Serenity rang a bell. It was the name of the snow leopard that escaped 4 years ago..... [FLASHBACK] "ATTENTION! Serenity the Snow leopard has just escaped!!" yelled the news woman on the street running. Galkhen ran with his mother. "Mom!" "GALKHEN! GO FIND YOUR DAD!" she yelled. She fell and died. [END] Serenity was the snow leopard that killed. "It can't be...." "What?" [FLASHBACK] Serenity the snow leopard has a scarred paw. A croc had bit her when she entered Their territory before she was caught. [END] "It all makes sense...." "What does?"
[CARTER] "Your joking...right Serenity?" I asked while watching her bite her lip. "Do I look like it?" she managed to say as she was close to my body. "I don't know..." She took another step,I wanted her closer. I wanted to kiss her.... So close..... "Carter...." She looked into my eyes while I stared back into her Fuchsia eyes... "Carter, you make me feel odd..." I tried thinking about her not being so close, but I could smell perfume, the scent of vodka. "H-How?" "I....I!!" She ran from my doorway into the pure darkness, fading away was her tail. [SERENITY] I...I'm so stupid. "Serenity!" I heard him holler. My ears...then my tail....Then I'm done. "Serenity?" I heard a voice say, stroking my tail. My tail pushed out nervous. I heard a screech. It was mine. I clutched carters arm...(I guess) and pressed my face into it, but...What?! Is his shirt....Warm? [CARTER] it may have been dark, but I'm not blind. She grabbed my head and kissed me. I wanted to moan in pleasure, but she didn't know we were kissing in the dark. It started raining. The perfect night. A kiss. Rain. The moon in full action. Serenity has the lips of an angel.... (PIC OF SERENITY:)
Well, this could've been good- but everything was too rushed. Also, the food was regurgitating? I'm sure the cafeteria workers would've notice had their food been throwing up. Score: 15/50
...for the amount of stories she's written, the fact she's still at the same place as a writer is disappointing.