Secrets don't make friends...

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheAshMo, Nov 14, 2011.

  1. This is my first fanfic so please go easy on me 

    I felt a cool breeze as I walked home that late evening on the empty street. What happened this week, has changed me... Forever.

    Should I continue?
     
  2. Yes continue please
     
  3. I guess I should start from the beginning. It was last day of school before Christmas break and everyone was anxious to get leave school. I was getting my English binder out of my locker when I heard someone say, "hey hot stuff how's it goin?" I knew that voice it was Chad Brewns, the man-wh.ore of the school. I looked up and rolled my eyes, "Chad get away from me."
     
  4. Want more?
     
  5. "c'mon babe when are you gonna just let me tap that?" he says. I give him the most disgusted look possible and say, "Chad you are disgusting pig! Get away from me and go get a life!" he acts hurt doing the fake thing where he puts his hand on his heart and gasps. I roll my eyes and turn to walk away when...

    Please tell me what you think so far and if you want more
     
  6. I liiike it! Bump! Continue!
     
  7. Chad launches toward my arm and spins me around, "bi.tch no one walks away from me." he grabs my face going in for a forced kiss I try to fight but es to strong he an inch from my face when all of a sudden...
     
  8. @theandi I love you story with Xander pete and cass, it's really good
     
  9. I felt a cool breeze as I walked home that late evening on the empty street. What happened this week, has changed me... Forever.

    I guess I should start from the beginning. It was last day of school before Christmas break and everyone was anxious to get leave school. I was getting my English binder out of my locker when I heard someone say, "hey hot stuff how's it goin?" I knew that voice it was Chad Brewns, the man-wh.ore of the school. I looked up and rolled my eyes, "Chad get away from me."

    "c'mon babe when are you gonna just let me tap that?" he says. I give him the most disgusted look possible and say, "Chad you are disgusting pig! Get away from me and go get a life!" he acts hurt doing the fake thing where he puts his hand on his heart and gasps. I roll my eyes and turn to walk away when...

    Chad launches toward my arm and spins me around, "bi.tch no one walks away from me." he grabs my face going in for a forced kiss I try to fight but hes to strong he an inch from my face when all of a sudden...

    Andy Roberts grabs Chad's shoulders and yanks him away from me, "Get away from her!" Andy shouts. Chad turns to punch Andy but Andy ducks and punches Chad in the stomach. Chad flys back, falls on the floor an slides.

    What do you guys think so far?
     
  10. Just as Chad is about to get up and retaliate the bell rings a teacher comes out and yells for us to get to class. Chad whispers to Andy and I, "this isn't over yet." Andy says whatever and walks over to me. "you okay?" he asks "I-I-I'm fine, thanks for getting that creep away from me." I barley manage to say not knowing if my voice is still shaken from the incident or if it's just because Andy makes me feel nervous.
     
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  12. I start to feel tired and my knees feel weak, I drop to the ground. "woah." Andy says, "your still pretty shaken huh?" he helps me up and I look into his eyes. My knees buckle again. "I should take you to the nurse" says Andy catching me as I fall. "no, it's all right. I'll be fine." I manage to say.
     
  13. Why are you bypassing? you will be silenced
     
  14. Ash It's really good! Keep going 
     
  15. I know now @hey haha and thanks Dream
     
  16. "Fine." Andy says reluctantly, "at least let me walk you to class." he says with a smile. I look up at him and his blue-green eyes meet my brown eyes, I smile, "ok you can walk me, thanks:)" We walk to class Andy's arm around my waist keeping me steady because I'm still a bit shaken. He feels so warm, I'm almost thankful towards Chad for allowing Andy and I to have this moment.