Stories from Mr. Winston's Class

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Simply_Fox (01), Nov 11, 2011.

  1. "There is a girl who looks in my window. Her features are clouded with mystery. The smile burnt black with night. She comes by night and only night.
    During the day she hangs over my shoulder, and I can see her face. Clouded blue eyes and white blonde hair. Her head is bent at an odd angle, as if she's broken her neck.
    She talks to me, her voice is sweet and deciding. Like honey going down you're throat." I pause and look up at my classmates. They look captivated by my words. I smile and start to open my mouth when the bell rings shrilly.
    "Mrs. Wulson, you can finish you're story on Monday. Have a nice weekend," Mr. Winston dismisses the class
     
  2. Hale comes up to me after class, I continue gathering my books and leave quickly. He follows me to my locker. I try to shove past him but it's like trying to move a mountain, pointless. I sigh,"I. Won't. Date. You. Now. Go. To. Hell!"
    He smiles coyly,"Ace, darling girl, you know I'm irresistible."
    "Not really now shove off!"
    "You, me, and a bowl of popcorn this Friday."
    "Sorry, I already have plans with your mother," I drop my books and kick him in the stomach. Hale crumples to the ground, his brown eyes tearing up. "Now will you leave me alone?"
     
  3. Hales View

    I scramble to my feet, and walk off. Trying to keep my egotastic look. A couple people laugh and one high fives me. I glare at them. [/i]Why is she so pretty? So out of my reach![/i], I think as I navigate the halls.

    Amber comes up to me, she looms great but she's not Ace. I smile and try to keep moving. Her slender fingers grip my arm and hold me in place. I ruffle my short, black hair and sigh.
     
  4. This is really really good!!! Please keep going. 
     
  5. I'll update in a minute
     
  6. Actually... Unless you want a tragic accident in which everyone dies... I should calm down
     
  7. Are you ok?? 
     
  8. I look at Amber, her large blue eyes staring me down. "What Amber? I need to get home," I say trying not to be hostile.
    She slides up so she's in front of me. Her voice drops to what she thinks is seductive,"You, me, and a blanket under the stars. Tonight."
    "Or you, yourself, and a blanket," I pull away and walk out the front doors of my school.

    View of Nate

    I wait as my dad stacks another heavy box on the one I'm currently holding. I feel it plop onto the stack, the weight vibrating down into my thick arms. I know I'm strong and built for football, but this is ridiculous.
    "Um, dad?"
    "Son?"
    "My arms feel like their gonna fall off sir."
    "Suck it up, these go in your room. Third floor," my dad pushes the boxes at me, signaling me to walk out of the van. I peek around the boxes so I don't trip. I'm tempting to quit writing if my boxes are gonna be this heavy every time we move.

    (OK FOLKS. THIS IS IMPORTANT. I WILL HAVE A CONTEST. MAKING THE THREAD IN A SECOND...)
     
  9. View of Ace

    I manage to get my long hair into a bun and look in the mirror, adjusting my oh-so flattering Gai. "Ladies! Gentleman! We don't have all day to do this. Chop chop," my Ju Jit Su instructor, Derris yells from the gym. Which is ironic, cuz I'm the only girl. I tug at the bottom of my jacket and head out.
    Hale is already out there, talking it up with a new kid. The new boy is tall, broad shouldered, and has skin the color of mocha. I walk over, completely forgetting how unflattering we all look. Except the guy, he looks amazing in his Gai. His shoulders fill it out where it drops down on the rest of us. I'm about to open my mouth when Derris talks again,"Aerial! Hale! Nate! You wanna join the rest of us?" I wince at the use of my real name and saunter over with my arms crossed.
     
  10. Gai is pronounced gay
     
  11. I love this storyyy