High School

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by RaychelElla, Nov 6, 2011.

  1. As good as a true author... :)
     
  2. Thanks Shriley if I can only get more ppl reading
     
  3. I read it!!! And I love it!!!
     
  4. Thanks I'll update at 8-9pm
     
  5. After about an hour of homework I was finally done with it."YES" screamed Raychel. "But now what to wear"curiously Raychel.I decided to fancy blue greenish lace short and skirt with black high heels. I heard Dylan honking his car so I rushed downstairs. The good was my mom wasn't home to see what I was wearing. I hoped into. Dylan "Hey what's up. He turned to me and face went all white."What" I said curiously . "You look beautiful"he said with a smile. I blushed and said "Thank.So where are you taking me?I said "Oh you know a restruant and the park"he said . "99s?"I said. "Yeah.That's probably my most favorite and cheap place to buy food" he said. I laughed at that.After a few minutes of talking we were there. I soon I got out of the car Sophia,Emma,
     
  6. Olivia were standing outside. Here comes the devil and trouble.
     
  7. Bump  write your book
     
  8. I will but I'm tired so tomorrow
     
  9. I think I'm just gonna let this story die
    I feel like no one reads it
     
  10. If I've get 4 more ppl say that I'll continue I'll will then
     
  11. It's soooo good  I check it every day
     
  12. I like it  but try to add in paragraphs and leave a line whenever you have direct speech  well whenever necessary.