After about an hour of homework I was finally done with it."YES" screamed Raychel. "But now what to wear"curiously Raychel.I decided to fancy blue greenish lace short and skirt with black high heels. I heard Dylan honking his car so I rushed downstairs. The good was my mom wasn't home to see what I was wearing. I hoped into. Dylan "Hey what's up. He turned to me and face went all white."What" I said curiously . "You look beautiful"he said with a smile. I blushed and said "Thank.So where are you taking me?I said "Oh you know a restruant and the park"he said . "99s?"I said. "Yeah.That's probably my most favorite and cheap place to buy food" he said. I laughed at that.After a few minutes of talking we were there. I soon I got out of the car Sophia,Emma,
I like it but try to add in paragraphs and leave a line whenever you have direct speech well whenever necessary.