It's make the story more suspense A little More Action Then comes a squeal so the daughter/boy will be in the story Plus teen pregernacy doesn't happen very much in the story so why not have something a little different from other stories Raychel <3
No offence but you do realise that 'bump' doesn't mean update, don't you ? And I don't think it's possible to tell that's one's pregnant on the night itself. Other than that, you're doing good.
I honestly didn't know what to say. I wanted to congratulate her, but at the same time I wanted to smack her. How could she do this to herself? But then again, she had wanted this to happen, obviously. I decided to be supportive. "That's great zoey!" I said "Really? I thought you would be aginst it. That's why I didn't tell you that I've wanted to have a kid for a year now. I'm so happy your happy. You know what, if its a girl, ill name it after you!"
I do have imagination. But this story is realistic, thus, I am informing her that it is not possible. Unless this story is like a fairytale or something that's really full of imaginative writing, I think it's better to stick with something with a high possibility of it actually happening. But of course, you can always just do what you want. I'm just giving feedback.