My Crush

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Mz_Kitty (01), Oct 26, 2011.

  1. Chapter 1

    Im at my locker and a hot guy walks up to me. "Hey" he says. I closed my locker. Then I turned around and sees him smiling at me. He had brown hair brown eyes tan and he was muscular. I backed up into my locker. " Um...... Hi" I say with a smile. "Um the principle said I have to share a locker with you" he says. "Oh....um....uh well here is your locker" I say. "May I ask for your name" he said. "It's Roxie " I say. "Mine is Derek " he says as he puts his stuff in the locker.
     
  2. bump. more plz
     
  3. GOOD SO FAR 
     
  4. write with a little more depth and better grammar and its good
     
  5. I run off to class. I find out that he sits by me. "Oh gosh I left my pen in my locker" I muttered. He gives me a pen and smiles. " Thank you" I say with a smile
     
  6. bumpy booooo 