Do You Hear Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GoddessOfTheWaters, Aug 22, 2011.

  1. I decided I will be continuing this story :D I had already planned out everything that would happen, so I'll just finish it for the sake of the fans (if I have any lol). I will be posting soon and also, vote for Do You Hear Me? as the greates fan fiction :) Thank You!
     
  2. I'm ur 1# FAN!!!!
     
  3. I'll be updating in a few
     
  4. Or not. Never mind. Sorry. There was a huge blackout from the snow where I live and I couldn't ipdate but now it's really late and I gotta go to sleep so tomorrow, I PROMISEE.
     
  5. I'm posting in a few minutes
     
  6. High pitched sobs woke me up abruptly. My eyes opened slowly and I turned my head to see my parents faced down on my hospital bed holding my hands, but I couldn't feel a thing. I tried to lift my one of my hands, but it didn't budge. When I tried to lift it, an opaque hand came up, not my real one. I sat up and stared at my half-transparent body form. My face turned to find my body still laying on the hospital bed, eyes closed. I didn't understand. What was this? Was I dead? Alive? Relief surged through my body when I heard the faint sound of the heart rate moniter still beeping. 'Then what is this?' I thought. Desperate to know what was going on, I got up and tried to talk to or touch my mom. I reluctantly put my hand on her shoulder. My eyes got wide at the sight of my hand going through her body. I quickly took it out. I was... a ghost-or at least something like it.

    "T," I heard a familiar voice call. I turned to see Andy standing at the door of my hospital room.

    "ANDY!" I ran to him and leaped as I embraced him for the first time in forever. Andrew staggered back. I could hold him. Touch him. Feel him.

    "Tiana," he said as he released me from his hug, "I need to tell you something. You're almost dead."

    "What?"

    "You're almost dead, babe. And it's Bridget's fault."

    "Oh my God," I said. But, suddenly, that didn't matter anymore. I had a smirk on my face.

    "Tiana, how can you be smil-" I cut him off with my passionate kiss. He stepped back as he realized what I had a second ago and started kissing back. As minutes passed, my hands were playing with his hair and his held my neck. It seemed like it had been forever since we could touch each other. Since we had the chance, we didn't pause to do it. We went to the nearest vacant hospital room and got on the bed never once breaking our kiss. I started to unbutton his shirt when I heard a sexy voice interrupt.

    "Well, that's something I didn't plan on seeing."

    I turned to see a handsome man smirking intently as he stared at me.
     
  7. Dayumm. More! Right now! You owe us! 
     
  8. Haha fine. but it'll be short :p