Atlantric: Unknown

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Loyal_PandaMan (01), Oct 24, 2011.

  1. Hello! This is my first story and I hope you enjoy! Credit to Storallelite 

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    Prologue

    The water was murky today, as it had been for the past week. My eyes dart from side to side. There Finally! A fish. Quickening my pace and tail going faster, I opened my mouth... Eww!

    I slow down. The fish have tasted odd lately... I swim toward the sea floor. Suddenly I see something large in the distance, and swim closer to it.

    Closer...

    I stop in fright. I try to swim away, but this thing sucks me toward it. I feel my tail getting heavier and slowing down...

    Breathing harder...

    -Blackout-
     
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