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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Karina-The-One-And-Only, Sep 20, 2011.

  1. I will only accept 


    Subscribed To Hard For Updates
     
  2. That sounds kinda weird.
    Subscribed to HARD for updates
    Just sayin
     
  3. How do u subscribe
     
  4. AMAZEING I love it
     
  5. Update soon
    Only tash got the subscribed thing right. !  but I'll post it on everyone's who comment here saying bump on the last two pages
     
  6. While Chloe and Andrew were walking to school, Karina was talking to Zuko.
    "Babe,why did you tell him to leave?"She asked.
    "You think I wanted to? I hate to see him leave ! He is a grown man but he isn't ready to live without us I know it, just wait he'll come back" He replied.
    "You sure?"She asked.
    "Positive"Zuko said. The couple hugged each other tightly.Ginger,Kina and Bella burst through the door.
    "Hey girl!"Bella yelled. Karina hugged the girls.
    "Are our plans to to the beach still on? Remember we from Jersey and we always go tanning!" Kina said.
    "Of course ad let's bring the guys!" Karina said.
    "Yea! PARTY!"The girls said. Zuko smiled and got packed. When he was walking to the car he saw Andrew walking to school with Chloe. Andrew didn't notice until Zuko yelled.
    "Hey baby! Which beach are we going to? And give me a kiss!"Zuko said. Andrew looked over and scowled.
    "We are going to Welch Beach and-"Zuko kissed Karina before she can finish.
    "I love you too sweetie now let's go pick up the guys so we can get to the beach and come back in time to see where Andrew is"She said. Andrew kissed Chloe and said that he loved her. Chloe laughed and they hurried to school. At the beach all the guys revealed their six packs but Zuko's was more better all the guys wanted his. Jeffery picked up Ginger and they made out. All Jeffery saw though was Charlie. Charlie was the most beautiful person on Earth. Zane built a Sand Castle with Bella. Matt and Kina made the food together. Zuko and Karina climbed the high rocks and dived in the water. They needed to be alone for awhile.
     
  7. Why don't you comment on my story?  I know that bump is good but I feel like that's all that you guys say ....
     
  8. Leaving the game by the end of the day of tomorrow so this story is cancelled ! 
     
  9. can I continue the story??
     
  10. I don't want anyone continuing this story
     
  11. By the end of the day Andrew left Chloe at her house. Andrew was hungry and couldn't beg for food. He tried getting a job but he was to stinky. Andrew went to the warehouse but was locked out. He went home to his parents admitting that he couldn't live without them.
    "I told you son"Zuko said. Andrew took a shower,ate and went to sleep.
    That night Karina and Zuko were cuddling.
    "I think we raised Andrew perfectly babe"Karina said to Zuko.
    "Yea I know you're a great mother"Zuko said.
    "Good! Well I'm pregnant and this time it's a girl!"She said. Zuko hugged Karina. They told Andrew. He was happy too he was is going to be a big brother. Chloe and Andrew got married after graduating from college and had 2 boys. Zuko and Karina's daughter got married with a boy named Drake after graduating from college. 20 years later, Zuko and Karina finally die and die in each others arms. They lie in the tomb together. Every Sunday Andrew an his sister visit them.



    THE END
     
  12. Well done
    But i feel the ending was too rushed
     
  13. Justin that's because I'm leaving the game and I cancelled the story I'm in a bad mood 