My Damaged Heart 

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by LadySapphire, Aug 29, 2011.

  1. Bump...working on it now so I'll post it up later ;)
     
  2. Okay so I'm going to show you Ethan's side of the story now since Kate is unconscious. I personally picked 4 of my best readers to feature in my story but on this chapter only two will come out so I hope you like it. Enjoy :)
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    Before Ethan came back

    [Ethan's POV]

    I called June and told her I was leaving. The thing is, they didn't know I was watching them from a tree. I know it seems stalker-ish but I had to see her one last time until i leave tomorrow. June eventually told her and she started crying. I knew she was still in love with me. My heart made a leap and then it sank a little. Seeing her like this, leaving her side when she's in pain was heartbreaking. And it's worse when you're the reason of that pain.

    The way her tears fall as she lay back down, closing her eyes made think how beautiful she was. I always thought she was amazing since I first laid my eyes on her. I missed her smile. It lit my face everyday but I was the cause of that also. I sighed and accidentally made a noise. Kate didn't hear it but June did. She saw me and widened her eyes. I gesture her to stay quiet so Kate won't find out. She nodded. I mouthed a silent thank you for comforting her and I jump down silently. After this is the start of my journey without her green eyes, her soft hair, the sound of her voice,her smooth hand,her breath taking smile and her thin pink lips but she's the reason for it.

    "I'll come back for you Kate...I promise."

    The next day, i packed up my stuff and was currently waiting for my flight. Someone sat beside me and I look up to find both my sisters, Natasha and Julia.

    "What are you doing here?!"

    Tasha grinned and her dark brown eyes sparkled.

    "What? I can't just let my baby brother go on a trip to save his love of his life alone can I?"

    I gave her a hard stare and looked at Julia for back up but she shrugged.

    "Sorry Ethan, I'm in this with her. We can't simply leave you alone on this. Mom and Dad are okay with you going if we are too."

    I groaned in frustration. Even though I appreciate them looking out for me but I hate it when they treat me like a kid. Kate needs me and I wanted to do it alone. Julia looked at me apologetically with the same ocean blue eyes and her blonde hair tucked behind her ear. We look really identical but Natasha's the only one who doesn't resemble with us. She had the same hair color but dyed it black and she has dark brown eyes. She looks like more of our mom than our dad.

    "Alright... Maybe I do need some help"

    I had to admit, both of them are smart and they might be helpful. Natasha smiled at me.

    "Good! So where are we going?"

    I looked at both of them guiltily before answering.

    "We're going to Italy..."

    Both they're jaw dropped and they looked at me in disbelief. I told them, someone there knows a cure for Kate's disease but never told anyone about it because he's known to be extremely selfish. Our family is somewhat rich because both my parents are CEO's of various companies but I didn't like that lifestyle. We barely even see them in a year.

    Natasha has a great talent for singing and dancing. She plays the guitar,piano and any instrument you can think of. She's really fun and outgoing but with new people, she's shy. Julia on the other hand, is more like me. She's pretty,caring, sporty and everything nice. She's also a bit more mature. The thing is, Natasha's the eldest despite her young looking face.

    "Okay...so do you have everything planned? Where we're staying, the budget and how are you going to get the information from him?", Julia asked.

    " Everything is set except for the last question. Honestly...I have no idea how to get it from him..."

    Both of them looked confused for awhile but then they smiled.

    "Okay...we'll help you with that. Kate is basically family so we have to save her. Whatever it takes"

    I smiled and we shared a group hug.

    Don't worry Kate. We're going to save you. Wait for me.
     
  3. Can someone wall my other readers of the new update? I don't have time :(
     
  4. so good!!!!!! bump
     
  5. I love it! 
     
  6. THERES ME!!!  BTW THIS IS GETTING SOOO GOOD 
     
  7. :lol: Lol yes...There's you XD
     
  8. Ossum!

    I wuv luv lurv it
     
  9. Awesome baby zatty!! U write really well!
     
  10. OMG UR AN AMAZEING WRITER
     
  11. Moreeeee Moreeeee Morreeeee  M O R E10000000 Bumps
     
  12. Thanks!!  
     
  13. Keep going ice
     
  14. Zatty! U write awsome, very good btw
     
  15. Love the story.. Bumpp 