Love really hurts

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Mz_Kitty (01), Oct 25, 2011.

  1. "Do you have feelings for me Kelly" He said " Yes why" I say " Great because..... I like you too" He says with a smile " Wow really" I say as I blush " Heck yea I mean there is no other girl that's like you" He says then leans in to kiss me. I had no choice but to give in. Our lips met and he puts his hands on my hips. While I have my arms around his neck. " Kelly do you want to go out with me" he says " Heck yea I would" I said. He kissed me again.
     
  2. 
     
  3. Poor jake
     
  4. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!! 
     
  5. The next day

    "Hey Kelly " Blake and Jake says at the same time "Hey Blake" I say as I close my locker and goes to class holding hands with Blake. Jake stands there and walks to class behind us. I sit at my desk and they sit at theirs. "Kelly you seem happy today" the teacher says "Yea I am" I say with a smile.

    Few mins later

    The bell rings and I walk out of class and I go to my locker and puts my things up. Then hears people chanting . I turn around and sees Blake gets hit in the face by Jake. I hurry over there and stops it. When I stopped the fight Jake hit me in my face. I cry and kicks Jakes in his nuts. I helps Blake. " Blake! Are you ok?!" I say "Yea I'm fine he missed but are u ok?" he says " No Jake hit me in my face" I say. Blake get really mad and starts punching Jack in his face. "Blake! enough you hurt him enough" I say. I try to calm him down. Cmon babe let's go to the nurse.
     
  6. This is epic
     
  7. I will update tomorrow
     
  8. Can I be honest here?


    Err..


    Instead of writing.

    Blake drove his car to the other side of the town and smashes the wall."Hey Blake Are you okay?" said Jenny.

    Write.

    Blake drove his car to the other side of the town and smashes the wall.

    "Hey Blake Are you okay?" said Jenny.

    That way it looks much better

    =_=
     
  9. No I was just kidding and no it's not better my story not yours
     
  10. The next day

    I was walking to school then Jake came up by me. "Kelly.....look I'm sorry for hitting you and Blake I was just angry that you ignored me" He said "But you didn't have to do that all you could of done was talk it out with me" I said as I cover my face "I'm sorry Kelly" He said "Never talk to me again!" I said as I walked away
     
  11. Fine suit yourself I was trying to give a suggestion.

    I'm leaving this thread.
     
  12. He stood there looking at me as I walked away. I went to class and covered my face the whole class period. "Kelly what happened to your face?" the teacher said " Ask Mr.Jake who love hitting people for no reason" I said and turned around and smiles at Jake and turns back around. " Jake what happened?" the teacher said "I was angry at Kelly because she likes someone else and I hit her in the face" He said embarrassedly. The whole class gasped. "Jake how could u hit a female in the face, thats not very mature to do now is it" the teacher said "Now is it Jake?" I say as I turn around and smiles. The bell rings. "No homework except for Jake you have to write a 3 page essay to prove how wrong it is to hit a female.
     
  13. It's so beautiful 
     
  14. Amazing and sad rocky... Hope it didn't actually happen :(
     
  15. Few hours later


    The bell rings and I head out the door and sees Blake waiting for me. I walk towards Blake. "Hey Blake " I said "Hey Hun" he says "ready for me to walk you home" he says "Yea " I said as we walked it was silent the whole time. When we got to my home he didn't say a word but bye. I wonder what's going on.

    The End