Nailed it! Also if I have room for a character I'd like to be in it. You could make me evil like a demon or something. If not that's np. Great story!
They stared up at the serpents, who looked back and only saw snacks. The group began to run, with the serpents crashing through the rock behind them. Suddenly, Julie slipped and cried for help as the serpents locked on to their new found meal. Then, as the serpents were about to strike, Charlie ran out and stabbed one as Aaron stabbed the other, blood rained from the serpents as they fell. Aaron picked Julie up and said, "even serpents can't stand between a good team." Charlie laughed at the saying and started to walk to the exit with bridget.