Sorry my last story didn't work out but I already have written 7 pages of this one so I can update more often. Enjoy!!! ----------------------------------------- Update: 10/1/11 Preface I crouched behind the bushes, waiting. The stars danced around the moon mocking me. They were taunting me, telling me they had a better life how I envied them. A soft coo caught my attention; a bird. No wait it was the signaler. He was calling me. It was my time. The force has sent me on this mission for one reason and our only purpose in life. I saw him. He strode up the path not worrying. To him this was just another midnight stroll. A chance to walking, get some fresh air but to us this was an intruder. Never, had an intruder slipped through our concrete system and I was going to keep it that way. It's easy, they come to close the force is sent out and we do our job, annihilate. One more step and I ponce, thats my duty. In our team we have the Lookout, the Signaler, the Clean up Crew and me the Annihilator. A cloud covered the moon making it impossible for the treachery to be seen. The clean up crew did there job n we headed back to base. We did not have to worry about the officials, they were on our side this time. Our purpose you may be wondering, well let's just say we are protecters of something that was never meant to be. This "thing" we are protecting is a government secret. You could say us and the gov. are like bff's, or whatever kids say now, i'm no longer in the loop. Our little development has strict rules and enforces them well. Thinking about it, you could compare us to lab rats that were given to the New United Government ( N.U.G ). We are the start of a better world. We are the future of tomorrow but the reason we have a tomorrow. I may have many strict rules but I want to be human again. I mean I am human it's not like I'm some freaky alien. This might be easier if I just told you my story. It is simple yet complicated. Like I said before we are the problem and the solution. It seems for like every solution there is a problem. The first problem is called teenage rebels. --------------------------------------- Sorry it was so long I wanted to get the whole preface done in one post though. Hope you liked it and please give me criticism. ~
I'm updating right.............. Now Or like in 10-15 mins I hope you like it Are you anxious yet?! This is like the first real chapter I'm exited and i've already read it Is that being cocky? I think it kinda is Oh well I mean it's not like you guys care what I say you just want my story to be posted I should probably shut up now huh? Ok..I'll go update That was my way of passing the time so you guys can read this and by the time your done I should almost be done updating btw I'm going to do short updates ok I have 1 more thing to say Thanks for being supportive of my story
---------------------------------------- Update: 10/3/11 ( I think ) Chapter 1akota I was just a normal teenage 16 year old girl who had a corky personality and a bad habit of following the crowd. As usual people would ditch school every second and third Wednesday of the month and text during class, but that was no big deal. Then people starting stoping out of school like flies. Revolutions began and the government still did nothing. Now I was a good student no 4.0 grade point average but I had all b's. Revolutions became larger and that's when it got brutal. Teens became thieves and and killers and were some of the most wanted criminals in the whole state of Indiana. I forcefully took place in several demanding rallies and have regretted it since. Finally the government took action. We were all forced back into school and the thought of revolting was out of question. But teens were still holding secret meetings in forests and graveyards. I knew you could only push the government to a limit before they really take action. I tried to stop by not attending meetings and said my parents were watching me, but that only worked for a little amount of time. My lies were put to a stop when my best friend Cheri was appointed president of the rebels. As a team, we decided to have a huge rally to show how we feel. ----------------------------------------- Hope you liked it sorry if it's boring it gets better i promise